The following errata report has been rejected for RFC5706,
"Guidelines for Considering Operations and Management of New Protocols and 
Protocol Extensions".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid8315

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Status: Rejected
Type: Technical

Reported by: Donald Eastlake <d3e...@gmail.com>
Date Reported: 2025-02-26
Rejected by: Mahesh Jethanandani (IESG)

Section: 3.6.1

Original Text
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   The protocol document should make clear the limitations implicit
   within the protocol and the behavior when limits are exceeded.  This
   should be considered in a data-modeling-independent manner -- what
   makes managed-protocol sense, not what makes management-protocol-
   sense.

Corrected Text
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   The protocol document should make clear the limitations implicit
   within the protocol and the behavior when limits are exceeded.  This
   should be considered in a data-modeling-independent manner -- what
   makes managed-protocol sense, not what makes data model
   sense.

Notes
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I am not sure what correct wording would be. The existing wording is self 
contradictory. The above "corrected" text is just a guess.
 --VERIFIER NOTES-- 
The play on words can be confusing, but there is nothing wrong with it as 
written. In addition, the suggested wording does not help clarify it any 
better. 

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RFC5706 (draft-ietf-opsawg-operations-and-management-09)
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Title               : Guidelines for Considering Operations and Management of 
New Protocols and Protocol Extensions
Publication Date    : November 2009
Author(s)           : D. Harrington
Category            : INFORMATIONAL
Source              : Operations and Management Area Working Group
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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