Hi Mahesh,
The point raised by Reshad is a valid one, for sure.
My point is that whatever decision we will be making here, it has to also
consider the 7134 where all these is rooted. The system yang has the following:
leaf address {
type inet:host;
mandatory true;
description
"The address of the NTP server.";
}
and
leaf address {
type inet:host;
mandatory true;
description
"The address of the RADIUS server.";
}
The simple fix is to update the description to be consistent with the type.
Maintaining the type would cover implems such the following random examples:
== aruba
tacacs-server host {<FQDN> | <IPV4> | <IPV6>}
==
== fortinet
IP address/FQDN
The IP address or FQDN with the port number (default = 49) of the TACACS+
server.
==
== PaloAlto
TACACS+ Server-Enter the IP address or FQDN of the TACACS+ server.
====
== Apstra
Hostname FQDN IP(s) - The fully qualified domain name (FQDN) or IP address of
the TACACS+ server.
===
Cheers,
Med
De : Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com>
Envoyé : jeudi 23 janvier 2025 21:04
À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>
Cc : Reshad Rahman <res...@yahoo.com>; yang-doct...@ietf.org;
draft-ietf-opsawg-secure-tacacs-yang....@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org
Objet : Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of
draft-ietf-opsawg-secure-tacacs-yang-04
On Jan 23, 2025, at 2:20 AM,
mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> wrote:
Hi Reshad,
Thank you for this review.
Please see inline.
Cheers,
Med
De : Reshad Rahman <res...@yahoo.com<mailto:res...@yahoo.com>>
Envoyé : mercredi 22 janvier 2025 23:32
À : yang-doct...@ietf.org<mailto:yang-doct...@ietf.org>
Cc :
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Objet : Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of
draft-ietf-opsawg-secure-tacacs-yang-04
One comment I forgot to add. The list server is keyed on name, so in theory we
could have multiple entries in that list to the same server (leaf address).
Should there be a unique statement for leaf address?
list server {
key "name";
[Med] Good point. This is actually inherited from the original RFC. I think the
list should have unique per address/port.
On Wednesday, January 22, 2025 at 05:25:39 PM EST, Reshad Rahman via
Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org<mailto:nore...@ietf.org>> wrote:
Reviewer: Reshad Rahman
Review result: Ready with Issues
Disclaimer: I am not a TACACS+ nor a TLS expert.
Overall the document looks good. Here are what I perceive are issues which
should be addressed.
"leaf address": it is of type inet:host, so is not necessarily an IP address as
per the name and description. Rename to "server" or "host"? But this would be a
non backwards compatible change.... At least change the description to say "IP
address or host name of the ACACS+ server."
leaf address {
type inet:host;
mandatory true;
description
"The address of the TACACS+ server.";
}
[Med] I let the original authors of 9105 clarify, but I suspect they followed
the same approach in RFC7317 (system yang) where that exact identifier and
description are used.
I agree with Reshad that the name does not match the type definition, which
does not match the description. If the idea is to accept either an ip-address
or a host-name, then calling it "server" or something similar would be better.
Per rfc6991bis a host is:
typedef host {
type union {
type ip-address;
type host-name;
}
description
"The host type represents either an IP address or a (fully
qualified) host name.";
}
If, instead, the desire is to accept an FQHN, then the type should be changed
to "host-name," and the description should be updated to reflect the type.
Cheers.
It is not clear to me why "leaf domain-name" was added. Section 3 refers to
section 3.3 of [I-D.ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13] but that section does not mention
domain-name.
[Med] That's to echo this part of [I-D.ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13:
Implementations MUST support the TLS Server Name Indication extension
(SNI) (Section 3 of [RFC6066]), and MUST support the ability to
configure the TLS TACACS+ server's domain name, so that it may be
included in the SNI "server_name" extension of the client hello **(This
is distinct from the IP Address or hostname configuration used for
the TCP connection)***. See Section 5.1.5 for security related operator
considerations.
'domain-name': Provides a domain name of the server per Section 3.3
of [I-D.ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13].
"leaf vrf-instance": not needed if source-type is source-interface (since the
VRF of the source interface would be used)? Add "must not()" statement or
describe the behaviour if vrf-instance does not have the same value as
source-interface's VRF.
[Med] This is actually inherited from 9105. I let the authors of 9105 check
this one.
"leaf port": remove the commented out "default 49"?
[Med] ACK.
"choice source-type": do we need "mandatary true"? Same question for the 2
instances of "choice ref-or-explicit"
[Med] I don't think so. These are optional.
"leaf single-connection": please add a reference. I think that should be to
Section 4.3 of [RFC8907].
[Med] OK
[Med] The changes made so far can be tracked here:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?url_1=https://boucadair.github.io/secure-tacacs-yang/draft-ietf-opsawg-secure-tacacs-yang.txt&url_2=https://boucadair.github.io/secure-tacacs-yang/Reshad-yangdoctors/draft-ietf-opsawg-secure-tacacs-yang.txt
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