Hi Erik,
Thanks for the comments.
Please see inline.
Cheers,
Med
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> Objet : Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-
> attachment-circuit-19: (with COMMENT)
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>
> ## Comments
>
> ### S5.2.5.2
>
> * Can the allocation-type "slaac" be used in here as well? It
> explicitly
> called out in another doc, but not mentioned here.
[Med] slaac can be used as well. We don't repeat this here as well because this
is covered by this text:
"The model supports the usage of dynamic and static addressing. This structure
relies upon the common groupings defined in
{{!I-D.ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac}}."
In order to help reader find where to look in that doc, updated to specifically
refer to {{Section 4.3 of !I-D.ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac}}.
>
> ## Nits
>
> ### S1.1
>
> * "or even the nature or the services" ->
> "or even the nature of the services"?
[Med] Fixed
>
> ### S4.3
>
> * "with a focus the provider" ->
> "with a focus on the provider"?
[Med] Fixed
>
> ### S5.2
>
> * "only for test and not for setting," ->
> "only for test and not for service," or something?
[Med] Went with "..only for validation test and not for enforcement,...".
Update this as well in 5.1.
FYI, we initially used "set" to echo a similar feature that is natively
supported by some protocols such as RFC6241 (already mentioned in that same
para):
test-option: The <test-option> element MAY be specified only if
the device advertises the :validate:1.1 capability
(Section 8.6).
The <test-option> element has one of the following values:
test-then-set: Perform a validation test before attempting to
set. If validation errors occur, do not perform the
<edit-config> operation. This is the default test-option.
set: Perform a set without a validation test first.
test-only: Perform only the validation test, without
attempting to set.
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