Hi John,

Thank you for the new version, taking into account the comments raised after 
the last IETF meeting. I have been through and it could be ready for WGLC.

However, if I may, I think the draft could be simplified a bit.
As it is, the document is structured as a self-contained document whereas it 
might not be required. For instance, the section describing the 3GPP system and 
the mapping between 3GPP and IETF slice concepts is already covered in other 
documents referenced in the draft, as already indicated in the intro:

Several network scenarios and mechanisms to map 3GPP and IETF network slices 
are found in 
[I-D.ietf-teas-5g-network-slice-application<https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-14.html#I-D.ietf-teas-5g-network-slice-application>]
 and 
[I-D.ietf-teas-5g-ns-ip-mpls<https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-14.html#I-D.ietf-teas-5g-ns-ip-mpls>].
 This document defines another mechanism where the source UDP port number of a 
layer 3 GTP bearer (or UDP encapsulated GTP) is used to map to the TN slice at 
the Provider Edge (PE). 3GPP slice management 
([TS.28.541-3GPP<https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-14.html#TS.28.541-3GPP>])
 and Attachment Circuit (AC) in 
[I-D.ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit<https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-14.html#I-D.ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit>]
 provide the basis for the necessary mapping. Extensions to attachment circuit 
as a service to support a layer 3 GTP-U (or UDP encapsulated GTP) bearer as an 
attachment circuit is described in Section 
2.4<https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-14.html#SLICE-MAP>
 and Section 
4<https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-14.html#UDPTunnel>.

Therefore, section 2.1, 2.2, 2.3 might not be needed. Having multiple 
descriptions might lead to confusion, wrong interpretation, etc. Removing them 
would simplify the reading to focus on the real purpose of the document, the 
technical body part beginning with the section 2.4.

It is just a proposal. But it could be worth to look into this direction.

Best Regards,

Lionel



From: Kaippallimalil John <john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com>
Sent: vendredi 15 novembre 2024 16:49
To: Lionel Morand <lionel.mor...@huawei.com>; mohamed.boucad...@orange.com; 
d...@ietf.org
Cc: t...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org
Subject: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-14

Hi Med, Lionel, all,

The draft is now updated to address all the review comments.
Please have a look at the draft / diff to see the changes.

Links from submission:

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Revision: 14

Title:    Mobility-aware Transport Network Slicing for 5G

Date:     2024-11-15

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Best Regards,
John


From: Kaippallimalil John 
<john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com<mailto:john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com>>
Sent: Thursday, November 14, 2024 10:44 AM
To: Lionel Morand <lionel.mor...@huawei.com<mailto:lionel.mor...@huawei.com>>; 
mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; 
d...@ietf.org<mailto:d...@ietf.org>
Cc: t...@ietf.org<mailto:t...@ietf.org>; opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org>
Subject: [Teas] Re: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-12 - Review request

Hi Lionel, Med,

Will revise to point to RFC8085, 5.1.1 for UDP port and entropy.

Lionel’s point about the L3 tunnel service type is a good one.
The authors had discussed making the model general to allow GTPU and other UDP 
encapsulations (ESP-UDP, VXLAN, GENEVE or GRE) but was not done in earlier 
revisions.
One approach is to revise the module name from “ietf-ac-gtpu” to “ietf-ac-udpt”

The model itself would be pretty much the same, but text in the draft would now 
accommodate AC with GTPU and the other UDP encapsulations.

Best Regards,
John


From: Lionel Morand <lionel.mor...@huawei.com<mailto:lionel.mor...@huawei.com>>
Sent: Thursday, November 14, 2024 3:13 AM
To: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; 
Kaippallimalil John 
<john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com<mailto:john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com>>; 
d...@ietf.org<mailto:d...@ietf.org>
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Subject: RE: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-12 - Review request

Hi Med, John,

I agree that it would be safer to point to RFC8085, especially if this draft is 
now in the normative track (due to IANA assignment requirements).

Now, coming back to the point 2 in my previous email (L3 Tunnel service type), 
the required AC is an IPsec tunnel between gNB and SEG and between SEGs in the 
core network side. And this draft specifies that the IPsec encapsulation with 
preservation of the UDP source port. Therefore, I would recommend not to 
mention “GTPU” in the YANG model name but something related to ESP-UDP (I don’t 
have any concrete proposal). GTP-U is only one example of protocols that would 
use this service.

Regards,

Lionel


From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> 
<mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>>
Sent: jeudi 14 novembre 2024 07:22
To: Kaippallimalil John 
<john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com<mailto:john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com>>; 
Lionel Morand <lionel.mor...@huawei.com<mailto:lionel.mor...@huawei.com>>; 
d...@ietf.org<mailto:d...@ietf.org>
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Subject: RE: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-12 - Review request

Hi John, all,

As suggested in a previous review, I would drop the reference to 
I-D.xu-ipsecme-esp-in-udp-lb.

You can consider pointing to 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8085#section-5.1.1, instead.

Cheers,
Med

De : Kaippallimalil John 
<john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com<mailto:john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com>>
Envoyé : mercredi 13 novembre 2024 22:19
À : Lionel Morand <lionel.mor...@huawei.com<mailto:lionel.mor...@huawei.com>>; 
Lionel Morand 
<lionel.morand=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:lionel.morand=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org>>;
 BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET 
<mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>>; Sri 
Gundavelli (sgundave) 
<sgundave=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:sgundave=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>>;
 d...@ietf.org<mailto:d...@ietf.org>
Cc : t...@ietf.org<mailto:t...@ietf.org>; 
opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org>
Objet : [Teas] Re: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-12 - Review request


Hi Lionel, Med,

Thank you for the review and comments.

Re: comment 1/ : The text in the draft mixes 2 aspects: copying the UDP source 
port used for LB entropy (I-D.xu-ipsecme-esp-in-udp-lb) – and – copying the UDP 
source port for mapping to slice.
Proposed resolution - reword the sentence in 2.4 with the following 2 sentences:
“The IPSec secured GTP-U packet should be UDP encapsulated with the source port 
number copied from the GTP-U source port number for the PE to select the slice. 
When GTP-U packets use the source port number as an entropy field for load 
balancing, copying it to the outer UDP source port number would preserve this 
as intended for load balancing [I-D.xu-ipsecme-esp-in-udp-lb].”

In 4.1 – reword to:

“'l3-tunnel-service' in [I-D.ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit] is extended 
in this document to carry UDP source port number/range.”

Re: comment 2/
Considering the text above, I-D.xu-ipsecme-esp-in-udp-lb does not need to be a 
normative reference (may be better this way since it is not yet an adopted 
draft ?)
However, I’m open to suggestions from the group.

Re: comment 3/ IANA considerations:
It does seem like the module name prefix 'ietf-' is reserved for IETF stream 
documents  [RFC4844].
This was something I had missed bringing up during the dmm session, and thank 
you for that.
Will revise to standards track.

I will also implement the proposals from Med on adding the reference in 2.1, 
fixing the Figure 4, removing Figure 5, IANA point code additions, and security 
section updates.

Best Regards,
John

.
From: Lionel Morand <lionel.mor...@huawei.com<mailto:lionel.mor...@huawei.com>>
Sent: Wednesday, November 13, 2024 12:39 PM
To: Lionel Morand 
<lionel.morand=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:lionel.morand=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org>>;
 mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; 
Kaippallimalil John 
<john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com<mailto:john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com>>; 
Sri Gundavelli (sgundave) 
<sgundave=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:sgundave=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>>;
 d...@ietf.org<mailto:d...@ietf.org>
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Subject: RE: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-12 - Review request

Hi John, Med,

I’m reviewing the draft and I have some questions for clarification. I’m really 
sorry if these questions have been already addressed.

1/ Dependency on I-D.xu-ipsecme-esp-in-udp-lb

In section 2.4, it is said:

--- [Mechanisms described in [I-D.xu-ipsecme-esp-in-udp-lb] may be used to 
encapsulate the ESP packet in UDP for better load balancing and this can also 
be used to preserve the UDP source port of GTP-U packet.]

Where “may” implying that it a possible option to preserve the UDP source port.

However, in section 4.1, it is said:

--- [The overall tree structure of the AC service in 
[I-D.ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit] is extended to support attachment 
circuits that are encapsulated layer 3 such as GTP and GTPU in ESP-UDP 
encapsulation (IPSec (ESP) UDP encapsulation as in 
[I-D.xu-ipsecme-esp-in-udp-lb]).]

Which indicates that the proposed extension does rely on implementation of the 
draft draft-xu-ipsecme-esp-in-udp-lb.

If it is correct, I think that the draft should be referenced as normative and 
not informative.

2/ L3 tunnel service type

If the support of draft-xu-ipsecme-esp-in-udp-lb is a prerequisite, I was 
wondering if the service provided by the AC is rather ESP in UDP encapsulation 
(with a specific semantic of the source UDP port and deactivation of 
loadbalancing) than GTP-U per se. I would maybe more accurate to focus on ESP 
in UDP encapsulation, even if the draft explains how it is used to handle GTP-U 
traffic. IMHO, it would remove the weird impression that an GTP-U based L3 
tunnel service could be described using only a source UDP port.

3/ IANA considerations

Because Med has commented that a new YANG module name has to be registered by 
IANA, I have checked and it said in RFC6020 that:

--- [The module name prefix 'ietf-' is reserved for IETF stream documents  
[RFC4844]]

Which would mean, if I’m correct, that the draft should be published as 
Standards-Track RFC (and not informational).

Again, sorry if these points have been already addressed.

Regards,

Lionel

From: Lionel Morand 
<lionel.morand=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:lionel.morand=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org>>
Sent: mercredi 13 novembre 2024 12:30
To: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; 
Kaippallimalil John 
<john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com<mailto:john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com>>; 
Sri Gundavelli (sgundave) 
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Subject: [DMM] Re: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-12 - Review request

Hi Med,

There is typo in the proposed change below: it is should be “extension” instead 
of “extenstion” 😊

OLD:
                       |  +--rw (l3-service)?
                       |     +--:(l3-tunnel-service)
                       |        +--rw l3-tunnel-service
                       |           +--rw type?   identityref
                       |             +--rw (ietf-ac-gtpu)?

NEW
                       |  +--rw (l3-service)?
                       |     +--:(l3-tunnel-service)
                       |        +--rw l3-tunnel-service
                       |           +--rw type?   identityref
                       |           <--ietf-ac-gtpu extenstion-->

From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> 
<mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>>
Sent: mercredi 13 novembre 2024 07:51
To: Kaippallimalil John 
<john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com<mailto:john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com>>; 
Sri Gundavelli (sgundave) 
<sgundave=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:sgundave=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>>;
 d...@ietf.org<mailto:d...@ietf.org>
Cc: t...@ietf.org<mailto:t...@ietf.org>; opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org>
Subject: [DMM] Re: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-12 - Review request

Hi John, all,

This version looks better. Please see below some quick comments:

* I still think that a pointer to 
draft-ietf-teas-5g-ns-ip-mpls-13#name-5g-network-slicing-integrat would be 
helpful to add in your Section 2.1. I know that you already cite that doc, but 
that citation is specific to QoS mapping.
* fix the formatting of Figure 4
* I would remove figure 5, but if you maintain it please (a) fix the indent of 
the first line and (b) also fix this part to indicate the location of your 
extension

OLD:
                       |  +--rw (l3-service)?
                       |     +--:(l3-tunnel-service)
                       |        +--rw l3-tunnel-service
                       |           +--rw type?   identityref
                       |             +--rw (ietf-ac-gtpu)?

NEW
                       |  +--rw (l3-service)?
                       |     +--:(l3-tunnel-service)
                       |        +--rw l3-tunnel-service
                       |           +--rw type?   identityref
                       |           <--ietf-ac-gtpu extenstion-->

* Add a note to the RFC editor to replace “RFC SSSS” with the RFC number to be 
assigned to I-D.ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit
* List I-D.ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit and RFC8519 as normative. I 
think that RFC9543 has to be cited as normative as well.
* The IANA considerations should be updated as follows:

OLD:
This document has no requests for IANA code point allocations.

NEW:
    IANA is requested to register the following URI in the "ns"
    subregistry within the "IETF XML Registry" [RFC3688]:

       URI: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-ac-gtpu
       Registrant Contact:  The IESG.
       XML: N/A; the requested URI is an XML namespace.

    IANA is requested to register the following YANG module in the "YANG
    Module Names" subregistry [RFC6020] within the "YANG Parameters"
    registry.

       Name: ietf-ac-gtpu
       Maintained by IANA?  N
       Namespace: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-ac-gtpu

       Prefix: ac-gtpu
       Reference: RFC XXXX

* Update the security considerations to follow the template at 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-20#name-security-considerations-sect

Hope this helps.

Cheers,
Med

De : Kaippallimalil John 
<john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com<mailto:john.kaippallima...@futurewei.com>>
Envoyé : mardi 12 novembre 2024 22:26
À : Sri Gundavelli (sgundave) 
<sgundave=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:sgundave=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>>;
 d...@ietf.org<mailto:d...@ietf.org>
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Objet : [OPSAWG]Re: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-12 - Review request

Hi all,

For the dmm reviews, please use version 13 that we just posted.

The revision was to align with the new revision of 
I-D.ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit that already provides the model for 
l3-service and l3-tunnel-service.



This new version also has a complete Yang model for ietf-ac-gtpu that was 
generated and compiled for accuracy  – Thanks, Med!

Please see the revisions in Diff below, or sectios 4.1 and 4.2.



Best Regards,

John


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From: Sri Gundavelli (sgundave) 
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Subject: [DMM] draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-12 - Review request

All:

This document, draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility, went through several 
revisions. Authors have presented the details on the latest changes. Please 
review and provide your feedback. If all the technical issues are resolved, we 
will issue LC.

Sri



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