> On Dec 2, 2024, at 5:34 PM, Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Russ,
> 
> Thanks for the review.
> 
>> On Dec 2, 2024, at 2:08 PM, Russ Housley via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org 
>> <mailto:nore...@ietf.org>> wrote:
>> 
>> Reviewer: Russ Housley
>> Review result: Almost Ready
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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>> 
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>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit-14
>> Reviewer: Russ Housley
>> Review Date: 2024-12-02
>> IETF LC End Date: 2024-12-09
>> IESG Telechat date: Unknown
>> 
>> 
>> Summary: Almost Ready
>> 
>> 
>> Major Concerns:  None
>> 
>> 
>> Minor Concerns:
>> 
>> Section 7:  The text says:
>> 
>>   ...  These protocols have to use a
>>   secure transport layer (e.g., SSH [RFC4252], TLS [RFC8446], and QUIC
>>   [RFC9000]) and have to use mutual authentication.
>> 
>> I assume that NETCONF and RESTCONF REQUIRE a secure transport and mutual
>> authentication.  Is that correct?  If so, can this be written in a way
>> that makes it clear that these other protocols already impose these
>> requirements?
> 
> Yes, NETCONF and RESTCONF require a secure transport, which are satisfied by 
> NETCONF using SSH, and RESTCONF using TLS/QUIC. Not sure of the statement 
> “these other protocols already impose those requirements”. Can you clarify?

I think it would be more clear to say something like:

  ...  NETCONF and RESTCONF require the use a
  secure transport layer such as SSH [RFC4252], TLS [RFC8446], or QUIC
  [RFC9000].  NETCONF and RESTCONFalso require mutual authentication.

Russ


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