Hi Doug, all, Some comments on this version:
* nit: s/Pre-Shared Keys (PSKs) Section 3.5/Pre-Shared Keys (PSKs) (Section 3.5) * nit: s/Although this document removes the option of MD5 obfuscation Section 4/ Although this document removes the option of MD5 obfuscation (Section 4) * nit: OLD: TACACS+ clients and servers widely support IPV6 configuration in addition to IPV4. NEW: TACACS+ clients and servers widely support IPv6 configuration in addition to IPv4. * Internal inconsistency: the first sentence makes a reco, while the last sentence says no. CURRENT: Implementations MUST support the TLS 1.3 mandatory cipher suites (Section 9.1 of [RFC8446]). The cipher suites offered or accepted SHOULD be configurable so that operators can adapt. This document makes no cipher suite recommendations. Readers should refer to [BCP195] for guidance. * Move [RFC9190] to be listed as informative @Arnaud/@Alan: Can you please help check your concerns are addressed in the document? FWIW, a diff against the version that was WGLCed can be seen at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-10&url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-14&difftype=--html Thank you. Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : internet-dra...@ietf.org <internet-dra...@ietf.org> > Envoyé : mercredi 16 octobre 2024 15:34 > À : i-d-annou...@ietf.org > Cc : opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : [OPSAWG]I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-14.txt > > > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-14.txt is now > available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area > Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > > Title: Terminal Access Controller Access-Control System Plus > (TACACS+) over TLS 1.3 > Authors: Thorsten Dahm > John Heasley > Douglas C. Medway Gash > Andrej Ota > Name: draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-14.txt > Pages: 18 > Dates: 2024-10-16 > > Abstract: > > The Terminal Access Controller Access-Control System Plus > (TACACS+) > Protocol provides device administration for routers, network > access > servers and other networked computing devices via one or more > centralized TACACS+ Servers. 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