As a contributor, I have reviewed the current revision of draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype. Like other reviews have said, many of the descriptions are lacking details compared to others (e.g., Linux USB is quite well documented in this table compared to almost all others). Overall, the document text is clear.
Other than that, I found a few typo nits. In Section 3.2.2, s/publically/publicly/g and s/liason/liaison/. In Section 4, s/preceed/precede/. As chair, I (and Mahesh our AD) have suggested that perhaps we move existing details to the opsawg GitHub org in its own repo. And if that is the case, perhaps Section 3.2.2 could be updated to refer to that repo and suggest a PR to merge said spec. I think this question needs to be settled prior to requesting publication. Joe
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