Hi Zahed, Thanks for the review. Please see inline
On Wed, 7 Aug 2024 at 19:26, Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-16: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thanks for working on this specification. I have no comments from transport > protocol points of view. However, if "host security agent", "network based > security", "network security services" etc are not well known or well > defined > somewhere, the reader would benefit if those are described before using in > the > context. > Yes, added terms for clarity. Cheers, -Tiru
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