Hi Med,

Thanks so much for your comments and feedback. Definitely we will go through 
them and come back with a more detailed answer.

Best regards

Luis

De: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>
Enviado el: viernes, 12 de julio de 2024 11:41
Para: draft-contreras-opsawg-scheduling-oam-te...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org
CC: net...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-netmod-schedule-y...@ietf.org
Asunto: Review of draft-contreras-opsawg-scheduling-oam-tests

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Hi Authors, all,

As part of our effort to check that the NETMOD Common Schedule module 
(draft-ietf-netmod-schedule-yang) common basis set for target uses, I reviewed 
all the I-Ds that use draft-ietf-netmod-schedule-yang. The review also focuses 
on whether the grouping are used as intended and if some of the existing 
groupings makes sense for a specific context.

There are some issues (?) related to the mix use of both utc and grouping with 
a time zone. Some clarification is needed. Also, the modules can benefit from 
the state grouping as a scheduled OAM can failure for various reasons. Tracking 
those is important for auditing objectives discussed in the spec.

The schedules are linked to tests but it is not clear how the result/outcome of 
the actions required to be linked back to the tests themselves or schedules.

Some brainstorming is needed about how to bind a test characterization with a 
schedule. The authors adequately tagged that issue, but not sure we need 
imports here.

My detailed review of draft-contreras-opsawg-scheduling-oam-tests can be found 
at:


  *   pdf: 
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/2024/draft-contreras-opsawg-scheduling-oam-tests-02-rev%20Med.pdf
  *   doc: 
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/2024/draft-contreras-opsawg-scheduling-oam-tests-02-rev%20Med.doc

As a side note, I like the spirit and objectives of 
draft-contreras-opsawg-scheduling-oam-tests.

Cheers,
Med

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