Hi Benoît, Thank you for the update.
I suspected that you would like to maintain “intent” mention (and thus still use SAIN) in the document :-) I made the proposal though because I do still think that SAIN has nothing inherent to IBN and can be applied in other contexts. I was even convinced that YANG should be mentioned in the title after reading the section about under-maintenance (that discussion motivates btw listing I-D.ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang as normative given that the flag discussion requires reading that YANG document). If you maintain the current title, please consider adding a note in the introduction about SAIN applicability scope. Thank you. Cheers, Med De : Benoit Claise <[email protected]> Envoyé : mardi 21 juin 2022 22:54 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <[email protected]>; Tianran Zhou <[email protected]>; [email protected] Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03 Hi Med, Many thanks for your deep review. We agreed with most comments, which we are busy inserting in a new version. The only comment I would not keen on acting upon is to change the title. However, you have a good point that we should mention earlier in the doc that this architecture is based on a YANG module, in a companion document. We'll introduce this. Regards, Benoit On 6/20/2022 4:11 PM, [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> wrote: Hi all, Many thanks to the authors for the effort put into this document. I think that the document is better compared to the last time I reviewed it. However, I think that some changes are needed to better articulate the intended behavior and overall operation. I had to jump several times between the terminology section (and some key elements in the introduction) and the core text to digest the concept that are being discussed. The flow can be worked better. FWIW, some more detailed comments can be seen at: * pdf: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03-rev%20Med.pdf * doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03-rev%20Med.doc Cheers, Med De : OPSAWG <[email protected]><mailto:[email protected]> De la part de Tianran Zhou Envoyé : mercredi 8 juin 2022 12:00 À : [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> Objet : [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03 Hi WG, This mail we start a two weeks working group last call for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture/ Please send over your comments before June 22. Please also indicate if you think this document is ready to progress. Cheers, Tianran, on behalf of chairs _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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