Hi Tom, Joe, Lot's of thanks for the review. Let us prepare a new version completing all the references and moving the examples to the annex.
Regarding the IANA question, you are completely right, we'll fixed that immediately. Best Regards, Oscar -----Mensaje original----- De: OPSAWG <[email protected]> En nombre de tom petch Enviado el: lunes, 20 de abril de 2020 12:39 Para: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <[email protected]>; opsawg <[email protected]> Asunto: Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-l3sm-l3nm review From: OPSAWG <[email protected]> on behalf of Joe Clarke (jclarke) <[email protected]> Sent: 18 April 2020 22:03 Joe Looking at the YANG module it would appear that a lot of prior knowledge is needed in order to understand it, such as QinQ, dot1Q, GRE, LDP, VRRP, etc etc ie they are what I think of as Normative References and yet I cannot recall seeing a YANG module with so few reference clauses; and the very few reference clauses that are there refer to RFC that do not appear in the I-D References. I also note that the IANA Considerations registers a different prefix to that in the YANG module and it is unclear /*UNUSED*/ is about. And examples in the body of the I-D rather than as an Informative appendix mmmm. I am unenthusiastic about looking any deeper. Tom Petch I'm getting to the virtual interim TODO items, and this was first on my list. I have requested a Yang Doctor review for revision -03 of this draft based on the author's request that it has reached a state of stability. Joe _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg ________________________________ Este mensaje y sus adjuntos se dirigen exclusivamente a su destinatario, puede contener información privilegiada o confidencial y es para uso exclusivo de la persona o entidad de destino. Si no es usted. el destinatario indicado, queda notificado de que la lectura, utilización, divulgación y/o copia sin autorización puede estar prohibida en virtud de la legislación vigente. Si ha recibido este mensaje por error, le rogamos que nos lo comunique inmediatamente por esta misma vía y proceda a su destrucción. The information contained in this transmission is privileged and confidential information intended only for the use of the individual or entity named above. If the reader of this message is not the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that any dissemination, distribution or copying of this communication is strictly prohibited. If you have received this transmission in error, do not read it. Please immediately reply to the sender that you have received this communication in error and then delete it. Esta mensagem e seus anexos se dirigem exclusivamente ao seu destinatário, pode conter informação privilegiada ou confidencial e é para uso exclusivo da pessoa ou entidade de destino. Se não é vossa senhoria o destinatário indicado, fica notificado de que a leitura, utilização, divulgação e/ou cópia sem autorização pode estar proibida em virtude da legislação vigente. Se recebeu esta mensagem por erro, rogamos-lhe que nos o comunique imediatamente por esta mesma via e proceda a sua destruição _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
