Found one mistake in my previous review:

> Frank Lichtenheld <[email protected]> hat am 18.05.2022 13:12 geschrieben:
> Documentation-only review.
> > Arne Schwabe <[email protected]> hat am 18.05.2022 11:32 geschrieben:
[...]
> > +  are comma separated keys/values. Currently defined are:
> > +
> > +  - ``backoff s`` - instructs the client to wait at least s seconds before 
> > the
> > +                    next connection attempt. If the client has already a 
> > higher
> 
> "has already" -> "already uses" ?
> 
> > +                    delay before reconnecting, the delay will not be
> > +                    shortened.
> > +  - ``advance addr`` - Instructs the client to reconnect to the (IP)
> 
> "to the" -> "to a specific"

After reading the code I see that I was mistaken. I thought that you would
specify an actually address here. But it is literaly the string "addr".
So the correct fix seems to be "to the" -> "to the next".

I wonder whether there would be some good way to make clear that "s" above
is a placeholder but "addr" is a literal string. "backoff <s>" maybe? Not sure.
 
> > +                       address of the current server.
> > +  - ``advance remote`` - Instructs the client to skip the remaining IP
> > +                         addresses of the current server and instead 
> > connect to
> > +                         the next server specified in the configuration 
> > file
> 
> Missing full stop.
> 
> > +  - ``advance no`` - Instructs the client to retry connecting to the same 
> > server
> > +                    again.
> > +
> > +  For example, the message ``TEMP[backoff 42,advance no]: No free IP 
> > addresses``
> > +  to indicates that the VPN connection can currently not succeed and 
> > instructs
> 
> Remove "to"
> 
> > +  the client to retry in 42 seconds again.
> > +
> >    When deferred authentication is in use, the script can also request
> >    pending authentication by writing to the file specified by the
> >    :code:`auth_pending_file`. The first line must be the timeout in

--
Frank Lichtenheld


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