Hi,

On Tue, Nov 17, 2015 at 7:51 PM, Phillip Smith <fuka...@gmail.com> wrote:

> The example.com domain is set aside defined by IANA for use as
> documentation
> examples.


Replacing references to "june.kg" etc., which could one day become
someone's private domain, is not a bad move. Though, not sure
why choose example.com over example.net or example.org, or even tlds like
.example, .test etc. which are also reserved for docs.

That apart, this is not a carefully constructed patch. It misses several
occurrences of "may" and "june" -- even the patch context shows some:

@@ -6626,11 +6626,11 @@ you will get a weird feedback loop.
>  .LP
>

see this one:


>  On may:


> -.B openvpn \-\-remote june.kg \-\-dev tun1 \-\-ifconfig 10.4.0.1
> 10.4.0.2 \-\-verb 9
> +.B openvpn \-\-remote host2.example.com \-\-dev tun1 \-\-ifconfig
> 10.4.0.1 10.4.0.2 \-\-verb 9
>  .LP
>  On june:


and there again, to list a few..

[..]

>
> @@ -6888,3 +6888,4 @@ as published by the Free Software Foundation.
>  .\"*********************************************************
>  .SH AUTHORS
>  James Yonan <j...@yonan.net>
> +Phillip Smith <fuka...@gmail.com>

Finally,  the AUTHORS section in manpage is a place to document the
principal AUTHOR(S) of the program that it describes. Traditionally the
original author goes there, sometimes with a pointer to full credits.

For all those reasons NAK from me.

Selva

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