Mike:
Got it. Thanks. We will update it. 

Yours,
Michael 




On 10/22/15, 12:18 PM, "michael mccune" <m...@redhat.com> wrote:

>On 10/21/2015 05:11 PM, Michael Xin wrote:
>> Rob and Michael:
>> Thanks for the update. We will probably not use any Openstack Logo.
>>
>> Here is the first draft of the flyer:
>>
>> http://5a6aa6580e900b8e8020-e5e45c5cb10329ebc9fb69948bb1b1a5.r65.cf1.rackcdn.com/ossp-flag-flyer.pdf
>>
>>
>> Please send us your feedback.
>
>i think my only suggestion on the text would be to slightly alter the 
>second sentence of the "What's the OSSP?" section.
>
>currently it is:
>
>"The Security Project undertakes both technical and governance 
>activities within OpenStack, aiming to provide guidance, information and 
>code that enhances the overall security of the OpenStack ecosystem"
>
>i would change the beginning to:
>
>"The Security Project undertakes both technical and governance 
>activities for the OpenStack community, aiming to provide guidance, 
>information and code that enhances the overall security of the OpenStack 
>ecosystem"
>
>but i think this is a pretty minor nit.
>
>regards,
>mike
>
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