Thanks for your feedback, everybody. I made some more edits to the document and tried to address the remaining comments left in the etherpad.
I think the current revision of the doc provides enough details on the metrics and goals, so it should be ready to be added to https://docs.openstack.org/doc-contrib-guide/ as an official project doc. Let us know if you have more comments. Cheers, pk On Mon, 09 Oct 2017 16:35:57 -0400 Doug Hellmann <d...@doughellmann.com> wrote: > This draft looks really good. I left a few comments on the etherpad. > > Excerpts from Jimmy McArthur's message of 2017-10-05 10:33:48 -0500: > > Sorry for the Google Docs link btw. That's where Petr and I were > > initially collaborating. I've moved this back to the etherpad referenced > > in ttps://etherpad.openstack.org/p/docs-i18n-ptg-queens > > <https://etherpad.openstack.org/p/docs-i18n-ptg-queens> > > > > https://etherpad.openstack.org/p/docs-i18n-ptg-queens-mission-statement > > > > > Jimmy McArthur <mailto:ji...@openstack.org> > > > October 4, 2017 at 1:18 PM > > > > > > > > >> Emilien Macchi <mailto:emil...@redhat.com> > > >> October 4, 2017 at 12:35 PM > > >> > > >> The draft is really good! It reflects very well what we said we would > > >> do at the PTG, way to go. > > >> > > >> I think the next steps would be: > > >> - Definition of Done, or how you consider something achieved (code > > >> merged, doc published, etc). > > >> - Metrics: what metrics do you use to measure what you're delivering. > > > For the DoD and Metrics our understanding of the task was that they > > > should be built into the Evidence of Success, though I think we could > > > still use some more specific metrics in certain spots. Emilien, would > > > you suggest we define these as separate line items as well? > > > > > > Thanks! > > > Jimmy > > >> - What do you expect by end of Queens (put some number in metrics is > > >> probably a good start) - it's already mentioned in your draft vision > > >> but it might be revisited once you define the 2 previous items. > > >> > > >> Good work! > > >> Jimmy McArthur <mailto:ji...@openstack.org> > > >> October 4, 2017 at 10:46 AM > > >> I've made a bit of progress on the collaborative vision for the Docs > > >> team: > > >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xy78CnmnKlQ7SbR1XewqgrUdGe7DqnKAGYw_9aj5Ndg/edit# > > >> > > >> > > >> > > >> This still needs plenty of work, but I wanted to put out what we have > > >> so we can start to get some feedback from other members of the Docs > > >> team. The Use Cases section in particular was really vast and hard to > > >> cut down into prose without getting too detailed. > > >> > > >> Welcome your feedback and input! > > >> > > >> Thanks, > > >> Jimmy > > >> > > >> > > >> > > >> __________________________________________________________________________ > > >> > > >> > > >> OpenStack Development Mailing List (not for usage questions) > > >> Unsubscribe: > > >> openstack-dev-requ...@lists.openstack.org?subject:unsubscribe > > >> http://lists.openstack.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/openstack-dev > > > > > > __________________________________________________________________________ > > > OpenStack Development Mailing List (not for usage questions) > > > Unsubscribe: openstack-dev-requ...@lists.openstack.org?subject:unsubscribe > > > http://lists.openstack.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/openstack-dev > > > Emilien Macchi <mailto:emil...@redhat.com> > > > October 4, 2017 at 12:35 PM > > > > > > The draft is really good! It reflects very well what we said we would > > > do at the PTG, way to go. > > > > > > I think the next steps would be: > > > - Definition of Done, or how you consider something achieved (code > > > merged, doc published, etc). > > > - Metrics: what metrics do you use to measure what you're delivering. > > > - What do you expect by end of Queens (put some number in metrics is > > > probably a good start) - it's already mentioned in your draft vision > > > but it might be revisited once you define the 2 previous items. > > > > > > Good work! > > > Jimmy McArthur <mailto:ji...@openstack.org> > > > October 4, 2017 at 10:46 AM > > > I've made a bit of progress on the collaborative vision for the Docs > > > team: > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xy78CnmnKlQ7SbR1XewqgrUdGe7DqnKAGYw_9aj5Ndg/edit# > > > > > > > > > > > > This still needs plenty of work, but I wanted to put out what we have > > > so we can start to get some feedback from other members of the Docs > > > team. The Use Cases section in particular was really vast and hard to > > > cut down into prose without getting too detailed. > > > > > > Welcome your feedback and input! > > > > > > Thanks, > > > Jimmy > > > > > > > > > > > > __________________________________________________________________________ > > > > > > > > > OpenStack Development Mailing List (not for usage questions) > > > Unsubscribe: > > > openstack-dev-requ...@lists.openstack.org?subject:unsubscribe > > > http://lists.openstack.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/openstack-dev > > __________________________________________________________________________ > OpenStack Development Mailing List (not for usage questions) > Unsubscribe: openstack-dev-requ...@lists.openstack.org?subject:unsubscribe > http://lists.openstack.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/openstack-dev -- Petr Kovar Sr. Technical Writer | Customer Content Services Red Hat Czech, Brno __________________________________________________________________________ OpenStack Development Mailing List (not for usage questions) Unsubscribe: openstack-dev-requ...@lists.openstack.org?subject:unsubscribe http://lists.openstack.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/openstack-dev
