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# GEN AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-18

CC @larseggert

Thanks to Robert Sparks for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/shFcI11Wajhydi8wJuFM3VaVfkI).

## Comments

### Inclusive language

Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see
https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and more
guidance:

 * Terms `her` and `his`; alternatives might be `they`, `them`, `their`

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### URLs

These URLs in the document did not return content:

 * https://taxservice.govehub.no
 * http://hl7.org/fhir/organization-type
 * http://example.info/claims/groups

I guess these are supposed to be example URLs. Please use the
designated example domain names for this.

### Grammar/style

#### Section 2.1, paragraph 1
```
fication does not require the use of any of these common fields by an API def
                                  ^^^^^^^^^
```
Consider simply using "of" instead.

#### Section 3, paragraph 6
```
 if any of the following are true of any of the objects in authorization_deta
                                  ^^^^^^^^^
```
Consider simply using "of" instead.

#### Section 3, paragraph 10
```
ke security decisions based on whether or not the request is asking for "mor
                               ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
```
Consider shortening this phrase to just "whether". It is correct though if you
mean "regardless of whether".

#### Section 7, paragraph 6
```
 Token Error Response MUST conform the the rules given in Section 5. 9. Reso
                                   ^^^^^^^
```
Possible typo: you repeated a word.

#### Section 16, paragraph 7
```
* tax_payer_id: identifier of the tax payer (if known to the client) A.4. eH
                                  ^^^^^^^^^
```
This word is normally spelled as one.

## Notes

This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the
[`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT].

[ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
[ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
[IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool



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