Aaron, some comments inline.

— Justin

On Sep 26, 2019, at 8:30 AM, Aaron Parecki 
<aa...@parecki.com<mailto:aa...@parecki.com>> wrote:

Hi Torsten,

I'm very glad to see this draft, I think it's definitely needed in
this space. Here are some of my thoughts on the draft.

"request_uri": "urn:example:bwc4JK-ESC0w8acc191e-Y1LTC2"

Is it acceptable for the AS to return just an opaque string, rather
than something prefixed with "uri:*"? I don't think anyone would be
confused about copypasting the exact string from the "request_uri"
response into the "request_uri" parameter even if it didn't start with
"urn:". If, for whatever reason, it is required that this value is
actually a URI, is there some expected namespace to use other than
"example"? I worry that if all the examples in the spec are just
"urn:example:bwc4JK-ESC0w8acc191e-Y1LTC2" then developers will end up
using the text "example" because they don't understand why it's there,
and then it serves no purpose really.’

This field must be a URI, as per JAR:


   request_uri  The absolute URI as defined by 
RFC3986<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3986> 
[RFC3986<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3986>] that
      points to the Request Object (Section 
2.1<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-19#section-2.1>) that 
holds
      authorization request parameters stated in section 
4<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-19#section-4> of OAuth 2.0
      [RFC6749<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6749>].


Somewhat awkwardly, the JAR spec currently states that the AS has to do an HTTP 
GET on the request URI, so that will need to be fixed in JAR before it goes 
forward. I don’t think that was always the case though, and I’m not sure how 
that changed.

As for the namespace, “example” is ok for an example URN. The problem with URNs 
is that nobody really understands how to do domain-safe fully compliant URNs. 
So perhaps we should instead use “urn:fdc:example.com<http://example.com>:….” 
Instead (as per https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4198).


The pushed authorization request endpoint shall be a RESTful API

I would drop the term RESTful and just say "HTTP API", as this
description is arguably RESTful at best.

Depending on client type and authentication method, the request might
 also include the "client_id" parameter.

I assume this is hinting at the difference between public clients
sending only the "client_id" parameter and confidential clients
sending only the HTTP Basic Authorization header which includes both
the client ID and secret? It would probably be helpful to call out
these two common examples if I am understanding this correctly,
otherwise it seems pretty vague.

Not quite, those differences are for the token endpoint, and this is capturing 
things from the authorization endpoint. I don’t quite understand the 
differentiation listed here either, though.


The "request_uri" value MUST be generated using a cryptographically
 strong pseudorandom algorithm

I assume this includes the use of a random number inside of a JWT, in
case the AS wants to use JWTs as the "request_uri" parameter"? If so,
it's probably worth spelling that out as it kind of reads like it has
to be literally a random string at first glance.

The URI is intended to be a reference not a value. If the client could send a 
JWT it would just send a request object instead of a request URI in the first 
place. So the intent is that it’s random, and maybe we should just say that 
explicitly.


That's all for now, thanks!

----
Aaron Parecki
aaronparecki.com<http://aaronparecki.com>
@aaronpk

On Sat, Sep 21, 2019 at 1:02 PM Torsten Lodderstedt
<tors...@lodderstedt.net> wrote:

Hi all,

I just published a new draft that Brian Campbell, Dave Tonge, Filip Skokan, Nat 
Sakimura and I wrote.

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-lodderstedt-oauth-par-00

It proposes a new endpoint, called "pushed authorization request endpoint”, 
that allows the client to push the Authorization Request payload with the AS on 
a backchannel connection instead of a front channel interaction. The AS 
provides the client with a request URI (according to draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq) 
that the client uses in a subsequent authorization requests to refer to the 
pushed request data.

We believe this simple mechanism will significantly increase OAuth security and 
robustness since any application can use it by just sending the parameters in 
the same encoding as used at the authorisation endpoint over a HTTPS-protected 
and (for confidential clients) mutually authenticated connection to the AS. It 
can also be used to push signed and encrypted request objects to the AS, i.e. 
it provides an interoperable way to use request objects managed at the AS for 
use cases requiring an even higher security level.

We look forward to getting your feedback.

kind regards,
Torsten.

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Date: 21. September 2019 at 12:47:28 CEST
To: "Nat Sakimura" <n...@sakimura.org>, "Brian Campbell" 
<bcampb...@pingidentity.com>, "Torsten Lodderstedt" <tors...@lodderstedt.net>, 
"Dave Tonge" <d...@tonge.org>, "Filip Skokan" <panva...@gmail.com>


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Name: draft-lodderstedt-oauth-par
Revision: 00
Title: OAuth 2.0 Pushed Authorization Requests
Document date: 2019-09-21
Group: Individual Submission
Pages: 12
URL:            
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-lodderstedt-oauth-par-00.txt
Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-lodderstedt-oauth-par/
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Abstract:
 This document defines the pushed authorization request endpoint,
 which allows clients to push the payload of an OAuth 2.0
 authorization request to the authorization server via a direct
 request and provides them with a request URI that is used as
 reference to the data in a subsequent authorization request.




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