In (1), could it maybe say "normative extensions" rather than "normative changes"?
Also Ping Identity is two words (rather than "PingIdentity"). Otherwise, it looks great. Thanks Rifaat! On Sat, Jul 21, 2018 at 3:25 PM, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > All, > > The following is the shepherd write-up for the draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-10 > document: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls/shepherdwriteup/ > > Please, take a look and let us know if you have any comments. > > Regards, > Rifaat & Hannes > > _______________________________________________ > OAuth mailing list > OAuth@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth > > -- _CONFIDENTIALITY NOTICE: This email may contain confidential and privileged material for the sole use of the intended recipient(s). Any review, use, distribution or disclosure by others is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify the sender immediately by e-mail and delete the message and any file attachments from your computer. Thank you._
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