I believe that the changes in 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-discovery-09 address the DISCUSS 
and comments.  Please review - ideally before the upcoming telechat.

                                                       Thanks again,
                                                       -- Mike

From: Mike Jones
Sent: Monday, February 26, 2018 11:03 PM
To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org>; Alexey Melnikov <aamelni...@fastmail.fm>
Cc: draft-ietf-oauth-discov...@ietf.org; oauth-cha...@ietf.org; oauth@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [OAUTH-WG] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on 
draft-ietf-oauth-discovery-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

The attached drafts address the DISCUSSes from Adam and Alexey in the ways 
proposed.  A summary of the changes from -08 is:
*        Revised the transformation between the issuer identifier and the 
authorization server metadata location to conform to BCP 190, as suggested by 
Adam Roach.
*        Defined the characters allowed in registered metadata names and 
values, as suggested by Alexey Melnikov.
*        Changed to using the RFC 8174 boilerplate instead of the RFC 2119 
boilerplate, as suggested by Ben Campbell.
*        Acknowledged additional reviewers.
I've attached both source and .txt versions to facilitate comparison to -08.  
Unless I hear additional suggestions for improvements by my end of business 
Tuesday, I'll plan to publish this as -09.

                                                       Thanks all,
                                                       -- Mike

From: Mike Jones
Sent: Sunday, January 28, 2018 7:23 AM
To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org<mailto:i...@ietf.org>>; Alexey Melnikov 
<aamelni...@fastmail.fm<mailto:aamelni...@fastmail.fm>>
Cc: 
draft-ietf-oauth-discov...@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-oauth-discov...@ietf.org>;
 oauth-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:oauth-cha...@ietf.org>; 
oauth@ietf.org<mailto:oauth@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on 
draft-ietf-oauth-discovery-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Your understanding matches with the intent of the language from RFC 7638. I'll 
plan to proceed on that basis then.
Thanks again,
-- Mike
From: Alexey Melnikov
Sent: Sunday, January 28, 7:04 AM
Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on 
draft-ietf-oauth-discovery-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
To: Mike Jones, The IESG
Cc: 
draft-ietf-oauth-discov...@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-oauth-discov...@ietf.org>,
 oauth-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:oauth-cha...@ietf.org>, 
oauth@ietf.org<mailto:oauth@ietf.org>
Hi Mike, On Wed, Jan 24, 2018, at 10:11 PM, Mike Jones wrote: > Thanks for the 
useful review, Alexey. I propose that we use the same > character restrictions 
that are described in > https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7638#section-6, which 
are: > > (a) require that member names being registered use > only printable 
ASCII characters excluding double quote ('"') and > backslash ('\') (the 
Unicode characters with code points U+0021, > U+0023 through U+005B, and U+005D 
through U+007E), This looks reasonable. > or > > (b) if new members are defined 
that use other code > points, require that their definitions specify the exact 
Unicode code > point sequences used to represent them. Furthermore, proposed > 
registrations that use Unicode code points that can only be > represented in 
JSON strings as escaped characters must not be > accepted. So just to double 
check: it is Ok to register names in Greek or Cyrillic (for example) and they 
will be compared in a case sensitive manner? > I also propose that we say that 
member name comparison occurs in the > manner described in 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7159#section-8.3. My understanding is that RFC 
7159 recommends case-sensitive comparison and that is fine with me. > Will that 
work for you, Alexey? Best Regards, Alexey > > Thanks, > -- Mike > > 
-----Original Message----- > From: Alexey Melnikov 
[mailto:aamelni...@fastmail.fm] > Sent: Wednesday, January 24, 2018 12:06 AM > 
To: The IESG > Cc: 
draft-ietf-oauth-discov...@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-oauth-discov...@ietf.org>;
 Hannes Tschofenig > ; oauth-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:oauth-cha...@ietf.org>; > 
hannes.tschofe...@gmx.net<mailto:hannes.tschofe...@gmx.net>; 
oauth@ietf.org<mailto:oauth@ietf.org> > Subject: Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on 
draft-ietf-oauth-discovery-08: > (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) > > Alexey Melnikov 
has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-oauth-discovery-08: 
Discuss > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to 
all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > 
introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to 
https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more 
information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along 
with other ballot positions, can be found here: > 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-discovery/ > > > > 
---------------------------------------------------------------------- > 
DISCUSS: > 
---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > 
Thank you for the well written IANA Considerations section. I have one > 
comment on it which should be easy to resolve: > > The document doesn't seem to 
say anything about allowed characters in > Metadata names. When the document 
talks about "case-insensitive > matching", it is not clear how to implement the 
matching, because it is > not clear whether or not Metadata names are ASCII 
only. If they are not, > then you need to better define what "case insensitive" 
means. > > > 
---------------------------------------------------------------------- > 
COMMENT: > 
---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > I am 
agreeing with Adam's DISCUSS. > > > 
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