Dear Brian, Thank you for having fixed it.
I don't think my name should be listed in the document just for this, though. It's too unbalanced considering others' contribution... Best, Taka 2017-06-12 20:57 GMT+09:00 Brian Campbell <bcampb...@pingidentity.com>: > Thanks Takahiko, mentioning it on the list is enough. I've fixed it in > the editors' draft https://github.com/ietf-oauth-mtls/i-d/commit/ > c6725e30dd1dc2f77aa293bce7fd1849713ed406 > > On Mon, Jun 12, 2017 at 5:33 AM, Takahiko Kawasaki <daru...@gmail.com> > wrote: > >> Hello, >> >> I'm sorry for this FAQ but where can I make comments for the draft of >> "Mutual TLS Profiles for OAuth Clients"? >> >> I found a trivial editorial issue in the last paragraph in "3. Mutual TLS >> Sender Constrained Resources Access". The second 'that' in "... verify that >> the that certificate matches ..." should be removed (= that part should be >> "... verify that the certificate matches ..."). Is it enough to mention it >> in this mailing list like this? >> >> Best Regards, >> Takahiko Kawasaki >> >> 2017-05-27 5:34 GMT+09:00 Brian Campbell <bcampb...@pingidentity.com>: >> >>> A new draft of "Mutual TLS Profiles for OAuth Clients" has been published. >>> The changes from the previous version are summarized below. >>> >>> >>> draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01 >>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01> >>> >>> o Added more explicit details of using RFC 7662 >>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7662> token introspection >>> with mutual TLS sender constrained access tokens. >>> o Added an IANA OAuth Token Introspection Response Registration >>> request for "cnf". >>> o Specify that tls_client_auth_subject_dn and >>> tls_client_auth_root_dn are RFC 4514 >>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc4514> String Representation of >>> Distinguished Names. >>> o Changed tls_client_auth_issuer_dn to tls_client_auth_root_dn. >>> o Changed the text in the Section 3 >>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01#section-3> >>> to not be specific about using a >>> hash of the cert. >>> o Changed the abbreviated title to 'OAuth Mutual TLS' (previously >>> was the acronym MTLSPOC). >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------- >>> From: <internet-dra...@ietf.org> >>> Date: Fri, May 26, 2017 at 2:26 PM >>> Subject: [OAUTH-WG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01.txt >>> To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org >>> Cc: oauth@ietf.org >>> >>> >>> >>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >>> directories. >>> This draft is a work item of the Web Authorization Protocol of the IETF. >>> >>> Title : Mutual TLS Profiles for OAuth Clients >>> Authors : Brian Campbell >>> John Bradley >>> Nat Sakimura >>> Torsten Lodderstedt >>> Filename : draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01.txt >>> Pages : 12 >>> Date : 2017-05-26 >>> >>> Abstract: >>> This document describes Transport Layer Security (TLS) mutual >>> authentication using X.509 certificates as a mechanism for both OAuth >>> client authentication to the token endpoint as well as for sender >>> constrained access to OAuth protected resources. >>> >>> >>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls/ >>> >>> There are also htmlized versions available at: >>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01 >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01 >>> >>> A diff from the previous version is available at: >>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-01 >>> >>> >>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of >>> submission >>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. >>> >>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> OAuth mailing list >>> OAuth@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth >>> >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> OAuth mailing list >>> OAuth@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth >>> >>> >> > > *CONFIDENTIALITY NOTICE: This email may contain confidential and > privileged material for the sole use of the intended recipient(s). Any > review, use, distribution or disclosure by others is strictly prohibited. > If you have received this communication in error, please notify the sender > immediately by e-mail and delete the message and any file attachments from > your computer. Thank you.*
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