Thanks for your review, Benoit.  Replies are inline below...

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> Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-
> bearer-21: (with COMMENT)
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> draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21: No Objection
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> I cleared my DISCUSS on the basis that RFC 6755 will be moved to an 
> informative
> reference in response to this process issue: IDnits complains of a normative
> reference to Informational document RFC 6755, which was not noted in the Last
> Call announcement.

Yes, I agree with this becoming informational.  For what it's worth, I just 
made this change to the related JWT draft.

> Editorial Nits:
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> S2.2: The paragraph before the actual example uses terminology inconsistent
> with RFC 6749:
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>  s/authorization code grant/authorization grant/

Per my reply on October 6 to Tom Taylor's review which made the same comment, 
actually, RFC 6749 uses both terms.  Authorization Grant is the generic term.  
Authorization Code Grant (defined in Section 4.1 of 6749) is a specific kind of 
authorization grant.  The text is correct as-is.

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