On the informational status, that seemed right, but I honestly don't know what 
the correct choice is here.   The actual registration happens via e-mail I 
believe, not via this document.

Thanks for the feedback!

-bill



----- Original Message -----
> From: Goix Laurent Walter <laurentwalter.g...@telecomitalia.it>
> To: Peter Saint-Andre <stpe...@stpeter.im>; William Mills 
> <wmi...@yahoo-inc.com>
> Cc: O Auth WG <oauth@ietf.org>; Apps Discuss <apps-disc...@ietf.org>
> Sent: Wednesday, June 13, 2012 9:44 AM
> Subject: R: [apps-discuss] [OAUTH-WG] OAuth discovery registration.
> 
>T hank you William for this initiative.
> 
> I had similar concerns than Peter on authn vs authz.
> 
> Under section 4.1.1 I would suggest to use "oauth2-authorize" instead 
> of "oauth2-authenticator", to be consistent with the 
> "oauth2-token" pattern and with the concepts of the oauth2 draft.
> 
> The header of the pages still reference sasl/gss-api and would need to be 
> updated.
> 
> Also, an example and/or use case section could be beneficial, e.g. to 
> describe 
> its usage in an xrd document. Other use cases may be mentioned as well 
> probably.
> 
> I have also noticed that your draft is mentioned as "informational". 
> It is indeed your target or only a typo?
> 
> Thanks
> walter
> 
>>  -----Messaggio originale-----
>>  Da: apps-discuss-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:apps-discuss-boun...@ietf.org] 
> Per
>>  conto di Peter Saint-Andre
>>  Inviato: mercoledì 13 giugno 2012 17.48
>>  A: William Mills
>>  Cc: O Auth WG; Apps Discuss
>>  Oggetto: Re: [apps-discuss] [OAUTH-WG] OAuth discovery registration.
>> 
>>  On 6/13/12 9:27 AM, William Mills wrote:
>>  >
>>  > Since for the OAUTH SASL mechanism I need discovery for clients to
>>  > work, and I had to rip the in-band discovery out of that mechanism,
>>  > and I need it defined somewhere, I've drafted a small doc for the
>>  > registration of link relation types for OAuth.  It's too late in 
> the
>>  > process to get this into the core OAuth 2 spec, and it doesn't 
> really
>>  > fit in the WebFinger. Submission info provided below.
>> 
>>  Hi Bill, overall this looks good. A few nits:
>> 
>>  OLD
>>     This document defines the LRDD [RFC5988] link type registrations for
>>     the OAuth [I-D.ietf-oauth-v2] authentication framework.  These link
>>     types are used during the endpoint discovery process using Web Host
>>     Metadata [I-D.hammer-hostmeta] and Webfinger
>>     [I-D.jones-appsawg-webfinger] by clients needing to discover the
>>     authentication endpoints for a service or site.  It additionally
>>     defines link type registrations for OAuth 1.0a [RFC5849].
>> 
>>  NEW
>>     This document defines the Link-based Resource Descriptor
>>     Documents (LRDD) [RFC6415] link type registrations for the
>>     OAuth [I-D.ietf-oauth-v2] authorization framework.  These link
>>     types are used during the endpoint discovery process using Web
>>     Host Metadata [RFC6415] and Webfinger
>>     [I-D.jones-appsawg-webfinger] by clients needing to discover the
>>     authorization, token, and access token endpoints for an OAuth2
>>     service or site.  It additionally defines link type registrations for
>>  OAuth
>>     1.0a [RFC5849] request initiation endpoints, authorization endpoints,
>>     and token endpoints.
>> 
>>  In Section 4.1.1, you register an "OAuth 2 Authentication 
> Endpoint",
>>  however draft-ietf-oauth-v2 defines only an authorization endpoint, a
>>  token endpoint, and an access token endpoint. Whence this
>>  "authentication endpoint"? Is it just a typo?
>> 
>>  Also, is the lack of a link type for OAuth2 access token endpoints an
>>  oversight? It seems so.
>> 
>>  You have "Reference: [[this document]]" but I think you want:
>> 
>>  Reference: draft-ietf-oauth-v2
>> 
>>  and
>> 
>>  Reference: RFC 5849
>> 
>>  You can remove the reference for draft-hammer-hostmeta (RFC 6415 has
>>  what you need).
>> 
>>  Peter
>> 
>>  --
>>  Peter Saint-Andre
>>  https://stpeter.im/
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
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