Hello,
I have read the draft of OAuth 2 rev 2.25 for the first time, so some of
my comments may be useless.
Sorry in advance if some of them have already been discussed and I
didn't find it in mailing list archive.
I found a grammatical error on page number 6, row 12 'refered' I think
should be 'referred'.
The document use 'resource owner user-agent' without having introduced
it first.
I don't know if it is possible to insert it in chapter 1.1, but I think
this can be useful for the reader to identify this entity. It also
avoids to make confusion regarding what a client is.
Regards
Luca
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Ing. Luca Frosini
Istituto di Scienza e Tecnologie dell'Informazione "A. Faedo" (ISTI)
Italian National Research Council (CNR)
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