This part of section 1.1 is confusing to me and I stumble whenever I read it
– I see that Brian Eaton suggested looking at it a while back but I don’t
think it got changed:



“OAuth includes four roles working together to grant and provide

   access to protected resources - access restricted resources requiring

   authentication:”



I would suggest something simpler, such as:



“OAuth includes four roles that work together to grant and provide access to
protected resources that require authentication.”





Gregory Brail   |   Technology   |   Apigee   |   +1-650-937-9302
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