In Section 6. Refreshing an Access Token (http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-v2-13#section-6) the text

refresh_token
         REQUIRED.  The refresh token issued along the access token being 
refreshed.


seems both somewhat contorted and somewhat misleading

Suggest  'along' --> 'along with' or 'along side'

Even with the above change, the access token being refreshed may well not be the same as that originally issued with the refresh token (ie the first in the chain of access tokens issued 'off' the refresh token)

Suggest 'The refresh token associated with the access token being refreshed'

paul
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