In Section 6. Refreshing an Access Token
(http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-v2-13#section-6) the text
refresh_token
REQUIRED. The refresh token issued along the access token being
refreshed.
seems both somewhat contorted and somewhat misleading
Suggest 'along' --> 'along with' or 'along side'
Even with the above change, the access token being refreshed may well
not be the same as that originally issued with the refresh token (ie the
first in the chain of access tokens issued 'off' the refresh token)
Suggest 'The refresh token associated with the access token being
refreshed'
paul
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