I'm just re-reading section one, and the overview in section 1.3 seems to have 
some inconsistencies/duplication with section 1.4 (profiles).

Specifically, on page 9 in draft 10, figure 3 shows an apparent profile. I 
assume this is just talking about a variation of the abstract profile. The 
paragraph before suggests this is the same "profile" as in section 1.4.2. Yet 
there are inconsistencies.

It is not clear to me what the text on page 9 is attempting to say that is 
different from section 1.4.2.  Or for that matter why figures 2 and 3 exist if 
there is another section on profiles.

Would it be better to cut out everything beyond the basic abstract profile 
description and leave out figures 2 and 3 in section 1.3.  Or do figures 2 and 
3 need more text make clear distinct separate "flows" that are used by profiles 
in section 1.4?

Phil
phil.h...@oracle.com




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