Hi Nicolas, Thank you very much for the review.
Please see inline below. -----Original Message----- From: nvo3 [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Nicolas Bouliane Sent: Thursday, October 29, 2015 7:10 AM To: [email protected] Subject: [nvo3] Review draft-ietf-nvo3-use-case-07 Authors, I have read draft-ietf-nvo3-use-case-07 and here's my review. It has been an easy and pleasant read since the text is clear and well written. The document helps grasping the potential of nvo3 in the context of data centers and to create a mental image of how things might interact together. I’d like just to point some suggestions: Introduction Paragraph 1 > o Independent address spaces in individual virtual networks such as > MAC, IP, TCP/UDP etc. General comment: I would add VLAN to the list to emphasize that it’s one of the major constraint nvo3 helps alleviate. Suggestion: o Independent address spaces in individual virtual networks such as MAC, VLAN, IP, TCP/UDP etc. [Lucy] agree. We can add it. Figure 2 General comment: I haven’t figured what “/S” means in “NVE1/S”, etc, that should be more explicit. [Lucy] It means the NVE on Server device. Will make it clear. General comment: Throughout the text the authors use “Data Center(s)”, “data center(s)”, either with or without capitalization without following a coherent style. [Lucy] Ack. Thanks, Lucy - Thanks Nicolas nbouliane at jive.com _______________________________________________ nvo3 mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/nvo3 _______________________________________________ nvo3 mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/nvo3
