On https://www.netbsd.org/docs/guide/en/chap-boot.html#chap-boot-editing line orientated -> line-oriented a very simplistic text editor -> a very simple text editor screen orientated -> screen-oriented
Further down: https://www.netbsd.org/docs/guide/en/chap-boot.html#chap-boot-keyboard-layout italian -> Italian Further down: https://www.netbsd.org/docs/guide/en/chap-boot.html#chap-boot-system-time The one reference to "GMT" *might* perhaps be better as "UTC". Further down: https://www.netbsd.org/docs/guide/en/chap-boot.html#chap-boot-pkgsrc The examples for pkgin search and pkgin install use different examples in the text and the code. (stat vs WORD, fscd vs fluxbox) That should probably be fixed. Further down: https://www.netbsd.org/docs/guide/en/chap-boot.html#chap-boot-security The link to http://www.netbsd.org/support/security/ should probably be changed to https://www.netbsd.org/support/security/ though that's an optional sort of change. Further down: https://www.netbsd.org/docs/guide/en/chap-boot.html#chap-boot-rebooting I think that a 'shutdown -p now' and 'poweroff' example should be added to the other two. Style-wise, I think it may be better to use "man page" than "manpage", which occurs three times in this chapter.
