On Thu, 20 Jan 2022 14:42:56 GMT, Xue-Lei Andrew Fan <xue...@openjdk.org> wrote:

>> src/java.base/share/classes/javax/net/ssl/SSLParameters.java line 619:
>> 
>>> 617:      *
>>> 618:      * @return a non-null, possibly zero-length array of application 
>>> protocol
>>> 619:      *         {@code String}s.  The array is placed in descending 
>>> order of
>> 
>> The phrase "descending order" seems more appropriate for numerical values. I 
>> think the previous wording was more clear, with a small change: "The array 
>> is ordered based on protocol preference, with the first entry being the most 
>> preferred."
>
> Hm, much better.  Thanks!

> The phrase "descending order" seems more appropriate for numerical values. I 
> think the previous wording was more clear, with a small change: "The array is 
> ordered based on protocol preference, with the first entry being the most 
> preferred."

Thanks Sean - I had the same comment - but for some reason it seemed to have 
been lost when I clicked on Approve. Not sure what happened to it :-(

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PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/7152

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