Hi,
A couple of typos in http://www.openbsd.org/faq/faq4.html
Section 4.5.2 - The Install Questions.
"syspending" => "suspending"
Section 4.5.4 - Choosing installation media and file sets.
"...using "+" and "-" chars..." - I think "characters" would be more
clear for a non-programmer.
Section 4.6.3 - Custom fdisk(8) layout.
'The "Size" value can be the number of sectors (512 bytes each)' -
doesn't sector size vary from one disk to another nowadays? I see no
indication of the sector size's being 512 earlier in the example.
"uh-oh! What's our offset?" - shouldn't the first letter of "uh-oh" be
capitalized as usual?
Section 4.6.4 - Custom disklabel layout.
"More information on the why partitioning is good and strategy for a
good partitioning plan are below" - probably should be "More information
on why partitioning is good and the strategy for a good partitioning
plan are below".
And below is just my nitpicking on sentences that made me go "What?!".
Section 4.5.4 - Choosing installation media and file sets.
"This is so either missed, forgotten or failed file sets can be
re-installed, and also so custom file sets can be installed" - I think
"that" after "so" would make it clearer.
Section 4.9 - Multibooting OpenBSD (amd64, i386)
"The boot(8) program is loaded from the floppy, looks for and reads
/etc/boot.conf" - maybe change to "...is loaded from the floppy, it then
looks for and reads /etc/boot.conf"?
Best regards,
Nick Permyakov
