Hello All,

I found this document on the BBC news website, which I have reposted here:

http://130.226.106.174/~paste/cgi-bin/20_06_06_iap_evolution.pdf

And after reading it I thought it would be an interesting exercise to
present it to the LyX-users list for thorough criticism with respect to
typographical and graphical layout. I think we could learn some interesting
things here (at least I could).

I shall not go into the content of the document, but only say that in my
opinion, this document is of major importance and therefore ought to have
perfect layout. However, looking closely at the document it is clear that it
was not prepared using LyX! I have this feeling that, apart from several
errors, a lot of typographical rules have been broken or ignored - and also
some graphical ones when considering the letterhead.

In my opinion the letterhead is poorly designed. The little black bar in the
top left corner annoys me, why is it there? The line reading "(The Academy
for Sciences for the Developing World)" seem badly placed shifting the
entire block right of the vertical bar.

The document contains several errors as far as I can tell: there is a white
space missing after (ii) and the vertical white space between 67. and 68.
institutions should not be there.  Furthermore, I am not sure I like the
choice of fonts (and the high number of fonts used). Finally, I have this
feeling that all blocks of text are aligned in an unpleasing way, but I
cannot say what exactly triggers this feeling. Perhaps somebody can?



Martin

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