Martin Vermeer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes:
| Index: index.php
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| RCS file: /usr/local/lyx/cvsroot/www-user/index.php,v
| retrieving revision 1.4
| diff -u -p -r1.4 index.php
| --- index.php 19 Sep 2005 13:48:13 -0000 1.4
| +++ index.php 9 Jan 2006 10:19:27 -0000
| @@ -51,33 +51,51 @@ include("news.inc");
| LyX is the first WYSIWYM document processor.
| </p>
|
| - <h3>LyX is what?!</h3>
| + <h3>Ehhh... please explain.</h3>
| <p>
| - LyX is an advanced open source document processor that encourages an
| - approach to writing based on the structure of your documents, not
| - their appearance. LyX lets you concentrate on writing, leaving
| - details of visual layout to the software.
| + LyX is a document processor
| + that encourages an approach to writing based on the <em>structure</em>
| + of your documents, not their appearance. It is released under a
| + <a href="about/license.php">Free Software / Open Source</a> license.
| </p>
|
| <p>
| - LyX was originally a Unix application, but now runs natively on
| - Windows and Mac OS X as well, thanks largely to the cross-platform Qt
| - toolkit.
| + LyX is for people that write and want their writing to look
| + great, out of the box. No more endless tinkering with
| formatting
The comma here: "...great, out of the box.' Is that correct?, or
should it just be removed? (perhaps with an inserted 'right')
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Lgb
