Sushant Raikar wrote:

More or less cosmetical comments, don't have time
to test or go into the logic of the code. Pavel


> +void BufferView::Private::send(FuncRequest const & cmd, SocketConnection 
> *p_excl_conn) {
> +             
> +     LFUNHolder lh;
> +     //just a random number for testing 
> +     lh.attach_version(10);          
> +     lh.attach_LFUN(cmd);

what this version means? why it's not in .h?

> +        printf("Done\n");

use lyxerr instead of printf, don't pull stdio.h. used on more places.

> +     connect(&d->timer_, SIGNAL(timeout()), this, SLOT(periodicTimer()));
> +     d->timer_.setInterval(500);
> +        d->p_conn_ = 0;
> +        d->client_conn_ = true;

indentation wrong.

> +        BufferView *p_bv = new BufferView(buffer());
> +        /// @TODO Just a random size in the hope that we skip some crash
> +        p_bv->resize(320, 200);

looks fishy. what exactly you are trying to achieve?

> -void BufferView::dispatch(FuncRequest const & cmd, DispatchResult & dr)
> +void BufferView::dispatch(FuncRequest const & cmd, DispatchResult & dr,bool 
> enable_send)

whitespace missing. would it make sense to add the bool into funcrequest?

> diff --git a/src/BufferView.h b/src/BufferView.h
> index a94ddfd..867bae4 100644
> --- a/src/BufferView.h
> +++ b/src/BufferView.h
> @@ -20,6 +20,8 @@
>  
>  #include "support/strfwd.h"
>  #include "support/types.h"
> +#include "support/Socket.h" 
> +#include <QTimer>

i don't know whether there is general consensus how much should we pull
qt dependencies into core.

> diff --git a/src/CursorSlice.h b/src/CursorSlice.h
> index 01634bd..a6d6408 100644
> --- a/src/CursorSlice.h
> +++ b/src/CursorSlice.h
> @@ -124,6 +124,10 @@ public:
>  
>       /// write some debug information to \p os
>       friend std::ostream & operator<<(std::ostream &, CursorSlice const &);
> +
> +     friend std::istream &
> +     operator>>(std::istream &, CursorSlice & );
> +

undocumented, why is it here who uses it etc.
the same in DocIterator.h

> +
> +void FuncRequest::serializeFrom(std::vector<unsigned char> const & v)

can be the variables named in more clear way or have some comments?

> diff --git a/src/LFUNHolder.h b/src/LFUNHolder.h
> new file mode 100644
> index 0000000..bde2402
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/src/LFUNHolder.h
> @@ -0,0 +1,60 @@
> +// -*- C++ -*- 
> +/** 
> + * \file LFUNHolder.h 
> + * 
> + * This file is part of LyX, the document processor. 
> + * Licence details can be found in the file COPYING. 
> + * 
> + * \author Sushant Raikar 
> + * 
> +*/ 
> + 
> +#ifndef LFUN_HOLDER_H 
> +#define LFUN_HOLDER_H 
> +
> + 
> +#include <vector> 
> +#include <string> 
> +#include <errno.h>
> +#include <FuncRequest.h>
> +#include <Cursor.h>
> +#include <DocIterator.h>
> +
> + 
> +namespace lyx {
> +
> +class FuncRequest;
> + 
> +class LFUNHolder {
> +public:
> +     LFUNHolder();
> +     LFUNHolder(Buffer * buffer);
> +     ~LFUNHolder();
> +
> +     std::vector<unsigned char> serialize();
> +     void unserialize(std::vector<unsigned char> const & v);
> +
> +     void attach_LFUN(FuncRequest cmd);
> +     FuncRequest* detach_LFUN();
> +     bool get_LFUN(FuncRequest &);
> +
> +     void attach_version(unsigned int const & ver);
> +     unsigned int detach_version();
> +     bool get_version(int &);
> +
> +     void attach_DocIt(DocIterator &);
> +     DocIterator* detach_DocIt();
> +     bool get_DocIt(DocIterator &);
> +
> +     void clear();
> +
> +private:
> +     int prefix;
> +     int version;
> +     FuncRequest * funcrequest_;
> +     DocIterator * dociterator_;

completely undocumented. this is the case in other headers as well.

> +/*!
> + * \var lyx::FuncCode lyx::LFUN_COLLABORATE_CONNECT
> + * \li Action: Connect to remote LyX instance for collaborative editing
> + * \li Syntax: connect host port
> + * \li Params: <host>: The host name or IP address
> + * \li Params: <port>: The IP port where to connect to

\li Params: should be used only in first line

> diff --git a/src/moc_BufferView.cpp b/src/moc_BufferView.cpp
> new file mode 100644
> index 0000000..1a3b40d
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/src/moc_BufferView.cpp

i don't think we track moc files.

> +#include <sys/types.h>
> +#include <sys/socket.h>
> +#include <netdb.h>
> +#include <assert.h>
> +#include <string.h>
> +#include <errno.h>
> +#include <stdio.h>
> +#include <fcntl.h>
> +#include <arpa/inet.h>
> +#include <unistd.h>

i wonder how this is portable.
have you tried to run this under windows? looks 

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