Am 16.10.2011 19:29, schrieb Enrico Forestieri:
When replaced by If.
And, according to you, that's the grammar error?
Our docs were during the last year kindly reviewed by Mr. Hudson - a lector in a publishing company.
He corrected almost all my when to if for the case that when was to referring to a time but to a
certain action or a case. I'm not a native speaker.
Bit this was only one point. I tried to take your announcement text as text for the docs and
therefore also make a proposal to change another sentence, but you are not willing to reply nor to
change anything in your announcement. I don't know why and thus quit this thread rolling on the floor.
