Rex C. Eastbourne wrote: > Here's a revised version; the graphic designer resized the equations. > > http://www.lyx.org/HomeNewGraphic > > I agree with JMarc that it would be nice to see how the download button > looks if it were made glossier, but I felt bad asking the graphic > designer for more help since I had asked him for so many revisions > already. But I think this looks nice, and the editable files are > available for anyone here:
Hi, I hope the following doesn't offend the creators (and you should take my words with a grain of salt because I'm not a designer myself), but I don't like it. o I think that the biggest problem is that is all seems part of an (rather absurd) unique document that mixes up a dictionary with some math and a diagram. This looks wrong among other things because of font mismatchs and spacing between formulas and text that is too small, much smaller than latex would give. o The download button itself is not very nice looking neither, maybe because there is too few space before and after the word "download". o The diagram seems confusing to me... is it one diagram or just two copies of the same thing with different colors? It probably would help if text/math corresponding to different documents had e.g. different angles, so to make explicit their difference. All IMHO of course :-) A/
