Great work.  Congratulations.

A few nits.

Best regards
-- 
Larry S. Marso
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On Thu, Jan 28, 1999 at 11:15:22PM +0200, Martin Vermeer wrote:
> -----------------------------
> Public release of LyX version 1.0.0
> ===================================
> 
> LyX is an advanced open source document processor running on many 
> platforms. 

     // <- I really think Unix should be mentioned in the opening sentence.


> It is called a "document processor", 

> for                    // <- replace with "because"

> unlike the popular     // <- this is confusing.  There are no 
> word processors,             popular word processors on Unix 
                               platforms.  WordPerfect is brand new,
                               available only for Linux and just 
                               beginning to get market share.

> LyX encourages an approach to writing based on the 
> structure of your documents, not their appearance. LyX lets you 
> concentrate on writing, leaving details of visual layout to the software. 
> LyX automates formatting according to predefined rule sets, yielding 

> concistency            // <- consistency

> throughout even the most complex documents. LyX produces high 
> quality, professionally typeset output -- using LaTeX, an open source, 
> industrial strength typesetting engine, in the background.
> 
> With LyX, short notes or letters are a snap. LyX really shines, though, 
> when composing complex documents like technical documentation, doctoral 
> theses and conference proceedings -- all of these real-life success 
> stories from LyX users.
> 
> LyX has undergone a quantum leap in functionality over the past 18 months. 
> This release offers extensive control over fonts, margins, headers/footers, 
> spacing/indents, justification, bullet types in multilevel lists, a 
> sophisticated table editor, 

> an emacs-style version control interface for   // <- Does this really
> collaborative document authoring                     speak to any of
                                                       you?  I find it
                                                       confusing.  

> -- the list goes on and on. LyX 1.0 
> includes many standard formats and templates -- e.g. for letters, articles, 
> books, overheads, even Hollywood scripts. Work continues on a growing 
> library of "plug-in" formats and templates, in the best open-source 
> tradition.
> 
> LyX presents the user with the familiar face of a WYSIWYG word processor. 
> However, users familiar with Microsoft Word or WordPerfect may be 

> perplexed by certain basic LyX behaviors.      // <- "behavior" singular.

> For example, repeatedly hitting 
> the space bar has no effect! This is by design: LyX puts in the proper 
> spacing for you, intelligently. Welcome to the LyX paradigm! 
> 
> You set the "ground rules" and place the elements of your document into
> proper categories. Say, you tell LyX that a certain line is a Section 
                     ^^^
                                    // <- "Let's say"

> title. LaTeX adds the Section to your table of contents, places the 
> Section name into your page header, gives it a special "bold" appearance 
> on the page, assigns it a number or label, and tells other parts of your 
> document what page it's on, for references and citations. Many of the 
> headaches of traditional word processing just vanish. 
> 
> LaTeX easily processes hundreds of chapter and section labels, thousands 
> of footnotes and inserted graphics, intricate cross-references, complex 
> multi-level outlines, formatted tables of contents and lists of 
> illustrations, and exhaustive indices or bibliographies, and is rightly 
> famous for the superb quality of its output. Users already acquainted 
> with "raw" LaTeX will find that LyX offers full LaTeX transparency and 
> features import/export of LaTeX documents.
  ^^^^^^^^
                                    // <- remove "features"

> LyX contains a fully integrated formula editor which is easily 
> best-of-breed, adding WYSIWYG point-and-click convenience to LaTeX's 
> legendary math writing capabilities. 
                 ^^^^^^^
                                    // <- maybe "math typesetting"?

> If you're into scientific authoring, 
> this is the jewel in the crown. TRY IT!
  ^^^^^^^
                                    // <- "LyX is a jewel ..."?

> Think of LyX as the first WYSIWYM word processor: What You See Is What 
> You MEAN. All the common formatting intelligence of LaTeX is presented 
                    ^^^^^^
                                    // <- "basic" instead of "common"?

> to the user through visual controls, like a table-of-contents window 
> acting as an outline browser, 

> "live" reference links to figure and table 
> captions, sections, pages and literature references, 

     // <- there's so much in this sentance, that the above portion
           doesn't read as a single item, which is what you intend.
           Parentheses might help.  How about: 

                "live" click-through reference links (to figure and
                table captions, sections, pages and literature citations),

> automatic 
> multilevel section and list numbering, and more. You tell LyX how to 
> treat particular words and lines in your document: e.g., this is standard 
> text, this is a Section title, this is a footnote, this is a caption 
> beneath an inserted graphic. As you click your selections, the WYSIWYM 
> interface gives you clean, straightforward "visual cues" (actually, very 
> WYSIWYG-like). 
> 
> The approach has ergonomic advantages. You can enlarge the screen fonts 
> to taste    // <- "according to your tastes" 
  ^^^^^^^^
     

> but still have all the text on the screen -- without affecting
> the margins and other formatting of your final output. Thus, you can work 
> comfortably also on small displays 

> -- or if your eyes are tired or your    // <- put this one in
> eyesight is not so good --                    parentheses.  It
                                                disrupts the flow
                                                to use too many
                                                em-dashes.

> and get the final output right with just a 
> couple of page previews using xdvi or ghostview.
> 
> LyX includes excellent and copious on-line help -- a beginner's tutorial, 
> user's guide, and additional manuals describing advanced features.  LyX's 
> menu system has been localized     // <- "translated"?
                       ^^^^^^^^^

> into a dozen different (Latin character 
> set) languages, each selectable at run time.
> 
> LyX conspicuously lacks a filter for importing MS Word documents. The 
> LyX Team considers this not worth the effort, as word processors in 
> general are moving away from proprietary formats to the open XML 
> standard. So, as long as you need continued access to legacy documents, 
> you should retain a traditional word processor, e.g., Corel's WordPerfect 
> for Linux.
> 
> LyX runs on standard Unix platforms, including Linux, FreeBSD, NetBSD, 

          // <- anyone for OpenBSD?

> Solaris, IRIX, HP-UX, AIX, ..., even OS/2 and Cygnus/Win32 (somewhat 
> experimentally), and provides native support for PostScript(tm) fonts 
> and figures. 
> 
> More about LyX, including screen shots and the LyX Graphic Tutorial, at:
> 
>       http://www.lyx.org/
> 
> What's new compared to LyX version 0.12.0?
> ------------------------------------------
> 
> Most importantly, import of existing LaTeX documents using the new 
> reLyX perl script. Better support for SGML/LinuxDoc, tables, and 
> indexing/bibliographies, etc. Summing up, it's just 

         // <- I object to "just"  ;-)

> better looking, 
> better working, better documented, and lots of bugs have been fixed.
> 
> How stable is LyX?
> ------------------
> 
> This release is considered stable, but as with any software, you should 
> take appropriate back-up steps in a production environment.

          // <- A few people I've known who had LyX crash on them
                (extremely rarely, of course) were *utterly flabbergasted*
                to learn that the program saved their work in the process
                of collapsing.  The tale astounds Windows users.  We
                should make hay of this one of these days.  :-) 
 
> What about KLyX?
> ----------------
> 
> KLyX is a port of LyX version 0.12.0 to KDE done primarily by Matthias 
> Ettrich and Kalle Dalheimer. It was done as a proof-of-principle, to 
> demo how good looking LyX could be made on this desktop environment, 
> and implement some advanced features which this environment facilitates. 

         // <- You might take another look at this.  "Done" is repeated
               twice.  You might stick a comma between "KDE done".  I
               have no idea what "proof-of-principal" means.  You ought
               to mention the qt toolkit.

> There is an intention to re-integrate KLyX into the LyX code base; by 
> version 1.2, LyX should be GUI toolkit/desktop agnostic.

         // <- kind of confusing

> Where can I get it?            // <- "Availability"?

> LyX is distributed under the GNU General Public Lisense (GPL), which 
> means specifically that you can use it for free. See http://www.gnu.org/.

         // <- Does this accurately capture the recent conniptions
               on the list?

> The main LyX site is
> 
>       ftp://ftp.lyx.org/pub/lyx/
> 
> with mirrors at
> 
>       ftp://alpha.tat.physik.uni-tuebingen.de/pub/lyx
>       ftp://ftp.lip6.fr/pub/lyx/
>       ftp://ftp.sdsc.edu/pub/other/lyx/
>       ftp://ftp.fciencias.unam.mx/pub/Lyx/
>       ftp://mirror.aarnet.edu.au/pub/LyX/

         // <- Are all these links live?

> The source code package is available at:
> 
>       ftp://ftp.lyx.org/pub/lyx/stable/lyx-1.0.0.tar.gz
>       ftp://ftp.devel.lyx.org/pub/lyx/lyx-1.0.0.tar.gz
> 
> and at the mirrors listed above.
> 
> You need 

> to have   // <- unnecessary

> XForms version 0.81, 0.86 or 0.88 to compile 

> your own     // <- maybe "to compile LyX-1.0.0"
> version. 

> Version 0.88 is highly recommended.

> Ready-to-run  //<- unnecessary

> precompiled binaries for various platforms are available at:
> 
>       ftp://ftp.lyx.org/pub/lyx/bin/1.0.0/
> 
> Binaries for i386-Linux are also available at your local metalab 
> (previously known as sunsite) mirror:
> 
>       ftp://metalab.unc.edu/pub/Linux/apps/editors/lyx-1.0.0-bin.tar.gz
> 
> Undoubtedly binaries packaged for various distributions (rpm, deb) will 
> appear soon on metalab.
> 
> Information and binaries for Cygnus/WinNT can be found at:
> 
>       http://www.cs.uu.nl/~steven/lyx.html
> 
> The LyX Graphic Tutorial can be found at:
> 
>       http://www.cs.uu.nl/~steven/lgt/lgt-0.3.html
> 
> It is possible to run LyX in a temporary directory before you install it.
> 

***          // <- WAIT!  WE DON'T SAY THAT LYX REQUIRES LATEX, OR  ***
***                SUGGEST TETEX AND OTHER DISTRIBUTIONS KNOWN TO   ***
***                WORK WITH LYX.  THIS IS VERY IMPORTANT!          ***

> About the LyX Team
> ------------------
> 
> The LyX Team is a world wide consortium of volunteer contributors. Many, 
> many people have helped make the 1.0 release possible, including:
> 
>       Lars Gullik Bjoennes, Alejandro Aguilar Sierra, Asger Alstrup,
>       Jean-Marc Lasgouttes, Juergen Vigna, John P. Weiss, Bernhard 
>       Iselborn, Andre Spiegel, Allan Rae, Henner Zeller, Robert van
>       der Kamp, David L. Johnson, Amir Karger, Joacim Persson, Peter 
>       Suetterlin, SMiyata, Alkis Polyzotis, ...
> 
> Special thanks should go to Matthias Ettrich who started it all.
> 
> Feedback
> --------
> 
> Please direct any comments or questions to the appropriate mailing list as
> described on the LyX homepage (http://www.lyx.org/).
> 
> Enjoy!
> 
> The LyX Team
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