Hi Ketan Thank you. Looks good to me.
Matthew From: Ketan Talaulikar <[email protected]> Date: Thursday, 28 April 2022 at 15:48 To: "Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)" <[email protected]> Cc: "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, lsr <[email protected]> Subject: Re: Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04 Hi Matthew, Thanks for your review and we've fixed all the nits identified by you in the updated version posted below: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-05 Thanks, Ketan On Wed, Apr 27, 2022 at 9:15 PM Matthew Bocci via Datatracker <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: Reviewer: Matthew Bocci Review result: Ready The draft is basically ready. I found the it easy to read and well written. Thank you! I have a few minor nits, intended to improve readability, as follows: Section 2.2: "..to a bunch of routers R1 thru RN..." I suggest changing 'thru' to 'through', to be consistent with the rest of the draft. "...towards the core getting diverted away..." I suggest changing this to "...towards the core to be diverted away..." Section 4 LLS Reverse Metric TLV Please expand 'LLS' on first use. Section 6 Procedures, first bullet "..by any of its neighbor on any of its links..." I suggest changing to "..by any of its neighbors on any of its links..."
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