On March 24, 2020 at 6:44:50 AM, Peter Psenak wrote:

> I posted a new version - draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-11. It should have all
> your inputs incorporated.
>
> Please let me know if you are ok with it. Once it's approved from your
> side, I will update the OSPF draft.

Yes, it looks good to me.  I just have a couple of minor nits (below)
-- no need to address them right now, you can wait for other Last Call
comments.

Thanks!

Alvaro.




86         Recently, mechanisms have been defined to signal labels via link-
87         state Interior Gateway Protocols (IGP) such as IS-IS [RFC8660].  This

[minor] Wouldn't a better reference for this be rfc8667?


90         In cases where LSPs are used for whatever reasons (e.g., SR-MPLS

[nit] s/LSPs are used for whatever reasons/LSPs are used


149        assigned by IANA for EARLD-MSD.  MSD-Value field is set to the ERLD

[nit] s/MSD-Value field/The MSD-Value field


199        considerations as described in [RFC4971], [RFC7752], [RFC7794],
200        [RFC8491], [RFC7752], [RFC8662],

[nit] rfc7752 is listed twice


265        [RFC4971]  Vasseur, JP., Ed., Shen, N., Ed., and R. Aggarwal, Ed.,

[minor] Please take this out, and replace the references in the text
to point to rfc7981.

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