Hi Acee,
to refresh the draft I published a new revision with changes we agreed upon (like dropping 'MPLS' from title) and minor editorial changes (change group to LSR and the like). I didn't add text to the backward compatibility section that you found confusing. Please give me know if answers in my previous email didn't clarify your questions/concerns.

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Anton


On 04/07/18 23:06, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
Hi Anton,

On 4/6/18, 7:33 AM, "Anton Smirnov (asmirnov)" <[email protected]> wrote:

         Hi Acee,
        my answers below (I didn't vet them with other authors, so they may
     express different opinions).

     >  1. Have you considered a shorter name for the RFC? For example: “OSPF
      >     Cross Address Family Traffic Engineering Tunnels”?

         Your proposed variant drops two pieces: "Routing with" and "MPLS".
    Dropping mention to MPLS is fine with me. Dropping "Routing with" seems     to me less correct because the draft is about ways to compute routes and
     not about setting up/managing tunnels.
         But ultimately I have no strong feelings here and if there is a
    requirement to shorten document's name then that would be a good candidate.


      >  2. Can you change the requirements language text to the RFC 8174
     version?

         OK, we will publish new document revision when we agreed on other
     points.


      >  3. In the section 3 mapping algorithm, why do you walk the X-AF
     >     endpoints from all connected areas? Why not just the area of local
      >     IP address?

        Idea behind this wording is to cater for cases when area borders are     laid differently in OSPFv2 and OSPFv3. It's even possible that router is
     ABR in OSPFv2 but not OSPFv3. From network design perspective this, of
     course, is a terrible thing to do - but not impossible.

I guess I still don't understand. Are you implying that you are advertising TE LSAs using both OSPFv2 and OSPFv3 and aggregating the TED and since the area boundaries may be different, you need to search all the areas LSP endpoints? I don't think this deployment model makes sense and I don't think this should be supported.


      >  4. In the backward compatibility section, can you also discuss the
     >     requirements for backward compatibility of the endpoints? Also state      >     that the X-AF tunnel will not be recognized unless the endpoints are      >     advertised by the same protocol (OSPFv2 or OSPFv3); or describe the
      >     behavior if this is not the intension.

         We can add paragraph saying something like:
     "In order for XAF computation to work tunnel tailend routers MUST
     advertise XAF Node Local Address sub-TLVs in OSPF instance that will
    perform XAF computation. Thus only tunnel endpoints (both tunnel headend
     and tailend routers) and only OSPF protocol instance performing XAF
    routing must implement XAF as described in this document. Other routers     in the network do not need to implement XAF algorithm or interpret Node     Local Address sub-TLVs. For example, if network uses TE tunnels signaled
     by OSPFv2 [RFC3630] and intends to use cross-AF route computation in
     OSPFv3 then only OSPFv3 implementation on routers that serve as tunnel
     endpoints in OSPFv2 needs to be compliant with this specification."

     Will this text work?

I think this could be a lot clearer if it were written from the perspective of the head-end router performing the calculation. Also, you lost me completely with the last sentence. We are uses a single protocol, OSPFv2 or OSPFv3 to advertise TE LSAs. Since both IPv4 and IPv6 traffic is tunneled over that LSP, there is no reason to operate both protocols since traffic will take the path of the X-AF LSP - correct?

Thanks,
Acee


     ---
     Anton


     On 04/04/18 20:13, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
     > Hi Anton, Alvaro, and Mike,
     >
     > In preparation for WG last call, I have a couple comments.
     >
    >  1. Have you considered a shorter name for the RFC? For example: “OSPF
     >     Cross Address Family Traffic Engineering Tunnels”?
    >  2. Can you change the requirements language text to the RFC 8174 version?
     >  3. In the section 3 mapping algorithm, why do you walk the X-AF
    >     endpoints from all connected areas? Why not just the area of local
     >     IP address?
     >  4. In the backward compatibility section, can you also discuss the
    >     requirements for backward compatibility of the endpoints? Also state     >     that the X-AF tunnel will not be recognized unless the endpoints are     >     advertised by the same protocol (OSPFv2 or OSPFv3); or describe the
     >     behavior if this is not the intension.
     >
     > Thanks,
     >
     > Acee
     >



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