Hello Uwe,

On Tue, June 23, 2020 11:41 PM, Uwe Kleine-König wrote:
> 
> Hello,
> 
> On Mon, Jun 15, 2020 at 08:40:23PM +0900, Roy Im wrote:
> > Adds support for the Dialog DA7280 LRA/ERM Haptic Driver with multiple
> > mode and integrated waveform memory and wideband support.
> > It communicates via an I2C bus to the device.
> >
> > Signed-off-by: Roy Im <roy.im.opensou...@diasemi.com>
> 
> Just some picky comments below.
> 
> > +   error = pwm_apply_state(haptics->pwm_dev, &state);
> > +   if (error)
> > +           dev_err(haptics->dev,
> > +                   "failed to apply pwm state: %pE\n",
> > +                   ERR_PTR(error));
> 
> You can save some horizontal space here by dropping the \n after the first 
> comma. (There are a few more occurences.)
> 
Ok, is this what you want?
        error = pwm_apply_state(haptics->pwm_dev, &state);
        if (error)
                dev_err(haptics->dev, "failed to apply pwm state: %pE\n",
                        ERR_PTR(error));

> > +   return error;
> > +}
> > +[...]
> > +
> > +           /* Sync up PWM state and ensure it is off. */
> > +           pwm_init_state(haptics->pwm_dev, &state);
> > +           state.enabled = false;
> > +           error = pwm_apply_state(haptics->pwm_dev, &state);
> > +           if (error) {
> > +                   dev_err(dev,
> > +                           "failed to apply initial PWM state: %pE\n",
> > +                           ERR_PTR(error));
> > +                   return error;
> > +           }
> > +
> > +           /* Check PWM Period, it must be in 10k ~ 250kHz */
> 
> The unit of a PWM period is in (nano)seconds, to it cannot be in the range 
> [10kHz, 250kHz]. (Is this too picky?)

No, it isn't. The 'Period' should be changed to 'frequency', I will fix this as 
below.

                /* Check PWM frequency, valid range: 10k ~ 250kHz */

> 
> > +           period2freq = 1000000 / state.period;
> > +           if (period2freq < DA7280_MIN_PWM_FREQ_KHZ ||
> > +               period2freq > DA7280_MAX_PWM_FREQ_KHZ) {
> > +                   dev_err(dev, "Not supported PWM frequency(%d)\n",
> > +                           period2freq);
> 
> Doesn't the compiler warn here about period2freq being unsigned and %d being 
> for signed int values?
> 
> For my (non-native) English ear s/Not supported/Unsupported/ sounds better. 
> Also my eyes would be pleases by a space
> before the opening brace.

I didn't see any warning message, but I will change/improve them to proper one 
and the log as below.

                period2freq = 1000000 / state.period;
                if (period2freq < DA7280_MIN_PWM_FREQ_KHZ ||
                    period2freq > DA7280_MAX_PWM_FREQ_KHZ) {
                        dev_err(dev, "Unsupported PWM frequency (%u)\n",
                                period2freq);
                        return -EINVAL;
                }
If you look ok, let me update this so.

> 
> > +                   return -EINVAL;
> > +           }
> > +   }
> > +
> > +
> > +[...]
> > +static struct i2c_driver da7280_driver = {
> > +   .driver = {
> > +           .name           = "da7280",
> > +           .of_match_table = of_match_ptr(da7280_of_match),
> > +           .pm             = &da7280_pm_ops,
> 
> I don't like alignment of =, but I'm aware this is a subjective thing.
> (The reason for me is that adding a new member that is longer than the 
> already existing requires touching all lines. So I
> stick to a single space before a =.)

OK, I will do as you said.

> 
> > +   },
> > +   .probe    = da7280_probe,
> > +   .id_table = da7280_i2c_id,
> > +};
> > +module_i2c_driver(da7280_driver);
> > +
> > +MODULE_DESCRIPTION("DA7280 haptics driver"); MODULE_AUTHOR("Roy Im
> > +<roy.im.opensou...@diasemi.com>");
> > +MODULE_LICENSE("GPL");
> > --
> > end-of-patch for RESEND PATCH V13
> 
> Best regards
> Uwe
> 
> --
> Pengutronix e.K.                           | Uwe Kleine-König            |
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