On Fri, Aug 1, 2008 at 1:32 AM, Trevor Daniels <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Hi Patrick
>
> All very clear and nicely laid out. Just a couple of suggestions:
>
> The headword music shows very few expressive marks - no dynamics,
> very few articulations, no phrasing slurs, arpeggios, etc. I wonder if
> a more suitable piece might be chosen (I know it was not your
> choice - Trevor maybe?).
I'll leave the headword untouched for now, but I agree that an excerpt
with a larger variety of `expressive marks' would be nice. Any
volunteers?
> I'd like to see a @ref's to the relevant MIDI sections in the seealso's
> under Dynamics and New dynamic marks, as there are issues with
> dynamics in MIDI. The sections What goes into the MIDI output?
> and Controlling MIDI dynamics are relevant. Actually the first of
> these is more generally useful; maybe it should be in some other
> sections too.
Okay. I'll add the links. There are likely some more @rinternals
links I can add too...
> Under slurs and phrasing slurs a seealso to @rlearning{On the
> un-nestedness of brackets and ties} might be helpful.
That would be helpful. I'll add these links too.
Thanks for the feedback, Trevor!
-Patrick
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