Hi, Joe - The first comments! I'm out straight today and have a rehearsal tonight, so I won't get to these until tomorrow, but I appreciate the response.
Take care, Ralph +++++++++++++++++++++++++ Ralph Palmer, CEM Energy/Administrative Coordinator Keene State College Keene, NH 03435-2502 Phone: 603-358-2230 Cell: 603-209-2903 Fax: 603-358-2456 [EMAIL PROTECTED] ******************************************************************* Date: Mon, 28 Jul 2008 17:12:38 +1000 From: Joe Neeman <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Subject: Re: GDP: first public draft, NR 1.4 Repeats To: Graham Percival <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Cc: lilypond-user Mailinglist <lilypond-user@gnu.org> Message-ID: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Content-Type: text/plain On Sun, 2008-07-27 at 22:22 -0700, Graham Percival wrote: > I'm happy to announce the first public draft of NR 1.4 Repeats! > Ralph Palmer has done a lot of work preparing this section; please > read it carefully and let us know about any mistakes or omissions. This looks really good! I don't know if I've mentioned it before, but I really like the "inspirational headwords." Comments: Introduction: "endof" -> "end of" When introducing "unfold", you mention "repeatcount" which might be a bit mysterious, since you haven't mentioned it before. Normal repeats: I see you have an example with a partial alternative. Maybe you should call attention to the \partial in the text, since this is something that seems to come up on the user list regularly. Tremolo repeats: Maybe mention (as a Known Issue) that cross-staff tremolos don't work well. Now I know that the organisation of sections is something that has been discussed a great deal, so if you have already thought about this, please ignore my next comment: in the introduction, you mention that repeats come in 4 types. Then you split up into *2* subsections. Given the text of the introduction, it seems more natural to split the section into 4 subsections (where the volta subsection would split further into 2 more subsections). Joe _______________________________________________ lilypond-user mailing list lilypond-user@gnu.org http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-user
