> > This is the second draft of Pitches. Please have > a look; it's been > significantly updated. Remaining items are > > Please let us known if there are any other issues > that should be addressed. >
Only three comments, all points of detail; otherwise looks good: 1. Sharps and flats are used in an example shown in Relative octaves entry and in the text above it before they have been mentioned anywhere. To an English speaker is and es are incomprehensible at first sight. Even in the LM they are used in 2.2.1 before the explanation in 2.2.2. I know the Notation Reference is not meant to be read sequentially, but inevitably it will be. Perhaps they should be introduced (as briefly as you like) in the first section on Absolute octave entry. 2. At the bottom of Accidentals there is a cryptic comment about microtones and MIDI. As neither micro tones nor MIDI have been mentioned so far this seems misplaced. 3. The note names table in other languages is poorly formatted (at least in html). > Cheers, > - Graham > Trevor D _______________________________________________ lilypond-user mailing list lilypond-user@gnu.org http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-user
