Reviewers: lemzwerg,
https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/notation/world.itely File Documentation/notation/world.itely (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode74 Documentation/notation/world.itely:74: Western staff notes are still used, but with special accidentals unique On 2019/05/31 07:05:12, lemzwerg wrote:
unique → uniquely
Done. https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode78 Documentation/notation/world.itely:78: Other, related, init files are also available; @file{hel-arabic.ly} and On 2019/05/31 07:05:12, lemzwerg wrote:
Other, related, init files → Other, related init files
Done. https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode438 Documentation/notation/world.itely:438: @q{group} of maqams than individual key signatures for each maqam On 2019/05/31 07:05:12, lemzwerg wrote:
than → instead of
Done. https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode439 Documentation/notation/world.itely:439: seperately. On 2019/05/31 07:05:12, lemzwerg wrote:
seperately → separately
Done. https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode505 Documentation/notation/world.itely:505: of a tone, from which are constructed the melodic forms known as On 2019/05/31 07:05:12, lemzwerg wrote:
from which the melodic forms ... are constructed.
Done. https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode521 Documentation/notation/world.itely:521: the basis of pitch on 1/9-tone divisions means makamlar employ a On 2019/05/31 07:05:12, lemzwerg wrote:
means → means that
Done. https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode522 Documentation/notation/world.itely:522: completely different set of intervals from Western scales and modes: On 2019/05/31 07:05:12, lemzwerg wrote:
from → compared to
Done. https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode560 Documentation/notation/world.itely:560: The correct accidentals koma flat (@var{b1}) and koma sharp (@code{f4}), On 2019/05/31 07:05:12, lemzwerg wrote:
accidentals, ... (...), ...
Done. https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode591 Documentation/notation/world.itely:591: contains information in English regarding Turkish makam including 2 CDs. On 2019/05/31 07:05:12, lemzwerg wrote:
2 → two
Done. https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/snippets/new/turkish-makam-example.ly File Documentation/snippets/new/turkish-makam-example.ly (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/diff/560710043/Documentation/snippets/new/turkish-makam-example.ly#newcode7 Documentation/snippets/new/turkish-makam-example.ly:7: Here is a template that also uses the start of a well known Turkish On 2019/05/31 07:05:12, lemzwerg wrote:
Here is a template that also uses... → This template uses...
well known → well-known
Done. Description: Doc: NR - 2.10 World Music Turkish Classical additions Additions to Turkish Classical Music From suggestions made by Adam Good also references to Adam's recent Turkish Makam additions. Removed @lilypond example and made it a snippet. Formatted changed sections so they follow more closely to the CG Guidelines. Removed the table listing some of the modes and referenced the Turkish Makam ly file instead as it has significantly more additions. Please review this at https://codereview.appspot.com/550780043/ Affected files (+164, -125 lines): M Documentation/notation/world.itely A Documentation/snippets/new/turkish-makam-example.ly _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
