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Description:
Doc: CG minor corrections to 2.1 LilyDev
Minor corrections to CG 2.1
Please review this at https://codereview.appspot.com/277450043/
Affected files (+4, -4 lines):
M Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
Index: Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
diff --git a/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
b/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
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--- a/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
+++ b/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ LilyPond, the documentation and the website (also see
@warning{LilyDev does not include the software for the Grand Unified
Builder -- also see @ref{Grand Unified Builder (GUB)}.}
-While compiling LilyPond on MacOs and Windows is possible, both
+While compiling LilyPond on Mac OS and Windows is possible, both
environments are complex to set up. LilyDev can be easily installed
and run inside a @q{virtual machine} on either of these operating
systems relatively easily using readily available virtualization
@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ The LilyDev disk image can also be written to a USB
device or @q{burnt}
to a DVD -- it is approximately 900 MB in size -- and installed just
like any standard GNU/Linux distribution.
-The current image is based on a 32bit version of Debian 8 (@q{Jessie})
-and the Disk image was generated using Debian
+The current image is based on a 32-bit version of Debian 8 (@q{Jessie})
+and the disk image was generated using Debian
@uref{http://live.debian.net/, live-build 4}.
@noindent
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ directory and the entire source code will start to be
downloaded into
it.
@warning{Be patient! There is no progress bar in the lily-git UI but the
-complete source is around 180@tie{}Mb.}
+complete source is around 180@tie{}MB.}
@noindent
When the source code has been downloaded, the @qq{command output} window
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