https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right):
https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode3490 Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:3490: Or dynamics that @q{stick out} of a system can be moved closer to the staff: On 2015/09/03 01:28:06, Dan Eble wrote:
Starting a sentence with "or" seems too informal. How about, "Another
example
is..."? Perhaps we could keep just one good example and throw away
the other
one; or if they are both equally important, maybe they deserve to be
separate
items.
Yes I'd concur with Dab. I'd simply remove the word 'Or', use a semi-colon instead of a full stop and continue with the sentence as it is. We typically use a semi colon at the end of 'sentences' that are about to be illustrated by an @lilypond example (i.e. instead of the colon you've put here). https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
