Looks good James, although the node structure looks rather suspect. I'm surprised this built without error. I've indicated some changes, but these may not be correct or complete. Please check this carefully. The text reorganisation looks fine though, although I've only read it on Rietveld and may have missed things.
Trevor https://codereview.appspot.com/120480043/diff/40001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/120480043/diff/40001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2695 Documentation/notation/input.itely:2695: @section Repeats in MIDI subsection https://codereview.appspot.com/120480043/diff/40001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2731 Documentation/notation/input.itely:2731: Whne using multiple voices, each on one must @emph{each} contain fully "When" and delete "on" https://codereview.appspot.com/120480043/diff/40001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2766 Documentation/notation/input.itely:2766: * MIDI Instruments:: The MIDI Instruments node name appeared in a higher menu. Delete this one. https://codereview.appspot.com/120480043/diff/40001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2923 Documentation/notation/input.itely:2923: @unnumberedsubsubsec MIDI Instruments subsection https://codereview.appspot.com/120480043/diff/40001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode3021 Documentation/notation/input.itely:3021: @section Controlling MIDI dynamics subsection https://codereview.appspot.com/120480043/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
