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How about that?
It doesn't include David's latest suggestions (because I was already
ready with it).
This suggestion is merely a kind of "in-place" rewrite, but
of course I'd also incorporate the more verbose suggestion
(particularly as I will be working on this
Text input -> Editing -> Editors/environments structure.
Description:
Web: Text-input: make LM reference more friendly.
I think putting it this way sounds less defensive or
arrogant.
I think it is better to combine the two paragraphs because
this section was somewhat jaggy.
Please review this at https://codereview.appspot.com/51460043/
Affected files (+3, -5 lines):
M Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
Index: Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
diff --git a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
index
9e7265cda9d8296c7c8ca070ffede157cff9c39a..9017293d36a192cb579873deb0082d001f8c3efb
100644
--- a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
+++ b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
@@ -1135,11 +1135,9 @@ We realize that many users find this way of entering
music a bit
odd. For this reason, we have written extensive documentation to
help new users, beginning with @ref{Learning}. The Learning
Manual is the best place to start, as many questions are answered
-before they come up!
-
-Please read the Learning Manual before complaining about bugs!
-New users occasionally believe that LilyPond is not working
-correctly, when in fact it is working precisely as designed.
+before they come up! Occasionally new users are unnecessarily
+irritated by some aspects of LilyPond's behaviour. Please read
+this manual before doubting whether LilyPond is working correctly.
More in-depth information is available in @ref{Manuals}.
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