A couple of nitpicks, otherwise LGTM.

https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi
File Documentation/web/download.itexi (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi#newcode57
Documentation/web/download.itexi:57: concept you'll find a list of known
editors. For beginners it is
"Beginners are recommended to ..."

https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi#newcode63
Documentation/web/download.itexi:63: However, if you already have and
editing environment and simply want
"and" -> "an"

https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi#newcode64
Documentation/web/download.itexi:64: to install a new LilyPond version
you can proceed below.
"proceed as described below."

https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/

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