A couple of nitpicks, otherwise LGTM.
https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi File Documentation/web/download.itexi (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi#newcode57 Documentation/web/download.itexi:57: concept you'll find a list of known editors. For beginners it is "Beginners are recommended to ..." https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi#newcode63 Documentation/web/download.itexi:63: However, if you already have and editing environment and simply want "and" -> "an" https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi#newcode64 Documentation/web/download.itexi:64: to install a new LilyPond version you can proceed below. "proceed as described below." https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel