Hello )-----Original Message----- )From: lilypond-devel-bounces+james.lowe=datacore....@gnu.org )[mailto:lilypond-devel-bounces+james.lowe=datacore....@gnu.org] On )Behalf Of Marc Hohl )Sent: 07 April 2011 11:07 )To: Lily-Devel List; Carl D. Sorensen )Subject: [Patch] Including mandolin fretboard diagrams ) )Hello all, ) )according to ) )http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/lilypond-user/2011-03/msg00260.html ) )I added mandolin fretboards and hopefully included the stuff correctly in )the documentation. )
Marc, I compiled it and what you have done from a Doc point of view is fine now that I can see it in context. I see actually that a couple of these paragraphs in general could do with a bit of a tidy up both syntactically and grammatically; there is a lot of (IMO) unnecessary repetition that could be edited down to be less wordy and more instructive-y ;) I'll take another look at the Doc part only when the patch is approved and pushed, so from that point of view your edits for the doc part is: LGTM! James
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